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| Celestias_Servant #1113710 4 months ago |
Behold my pitiful attempts of rhyming... Took me damn long enough. Still hope it's acceptable. Anyways, enjoy. |
| drilldick #1113786 4 months ago |
nice work |
| Captain_Carnation #1113958 4 months ago |
While I commend you on your rhyming attempt,
From criticism you are not exempt. I noticed you used near or visual rhymes When strapped for an answer, but that's fine sometimes. |
| GreyAcumane #1114477 4 months ago |
I can see you made an honest effort, but my first attempt didn't even get past the first panel, and my second attempt only got about 4 or 5 panels in. I couldn't finish. Sorry. |
| Anonymous #1114504 4 months ago |
@GreyAcumane
What was so irritating about it? |
| DoctorDreidal #1114858 4 months ago |
You made good use of Iambic Pentameter
I enjoyed reading this interview...er...wameter...? |
| Anonymous #1115705 4 months ago |
Applejack, with coat of orange... |
| HeroInferno #1115761 4 months ago |
@705 Are you in need of a throat lozange? |
| Dysons_Fear #1117132 4 months ago |
Bravo my friend, that was nice. |
| Step-chan #1120600 4 months ago |
Oh my god! My question got answered!
:D |
| Korora #1144116 4 months ago |
@705: "..What is this fic 'Fob<I>bies</I> Are Borange'?" |