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| benger #1083830 4 months ago |
i cant say i love the art style, but the concept is adorable! |
| d715 #1083842 4 months ago |
^
any way you think I can inprove on it is a pkus |
| d715 #1083845 4 months ago |
*plus |
| foxguy999 #1083853 4 months ago |
Adding more details to the eyes better would seriously improve the look of the comic, imo. |
| d715 #1083861 4 months ago |
^
Well I tagged "work in progress" for a reason |
| Lium #1083884 4 months ago |
It seems rather... roughly sketched. |
| StarrySkies #1083886 4 months ago |
@d715
Though this one isn't much of a biggy, but more detail in the background would be more great too. You've got the right idea, but the background keeps on dramatically changing. And Celestia's head, I understand it's so you can't see she's in a box but there are other ways like he head leaned out. But a floating head can seem a little out of place. Either way this is a very cute comic. <3 |
| d715 #1083922 4 months ago |
^
Thanks for the tips, everything should be "even out" once I finish I don't think I'll be able to fix Celestia's head I've got like 30 other art projects backed up and 3 fanfics I'm tring to finished in a week or two. So I don't think I have the time to change it. |
| Xuncu #1084032 4 months ago |
Can't unsee: Celestia's head is a balloon. |
| WatermelonRat #1084140 4 months ago |
The crude style is kind of endearing. |