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| P0ny_News #905874 5 months ago |
what? |
| P0ny_News #905876 5 months ago |
So, where's that description? I see nothing. |
| Starlight42896 #905877 5 months ago |
Name: Starlight (duh)
Age: 21(Outside fanfiction as well as in few parts inside fanfiction) 15(in fanfiction) Type of pony: Pegesus (pretty obvious *points to wings in picture*) Mane and body type and color: slightly smaller than other ponies but not by much. as for color, simple blue and very light blue colors (she is meant to blend in like other ponies as well as stick out like the mane six) Character(s) based on: small personality mixes between Twilight Sparkle, Luna, Rainbow Dash, and a total bitch. character style is based on Luna and Twilight (without the horn of course) Special skills: (Outside fanfiction)Using her Magical CutieMark to poof up some sneeze powder or a plate of her favorite food (Magic is VERY limited and can be stopped by even foal unicorns) In fanfiction she is nothing but a normal pony with a dramatic backstory. Favorite food: Cookies of any kind (She often eats sugar cookies) Major/Minor roles in fanfiction: (Broken Wings) In Broken Wings, Starlight is struggling in her home town and needs to relocate before she hurts herself. one of her old friends told her to go to Cloudsdale. at first she doesnt accept until that friend dies because of a stunt Starlight wanted her to do. With nothing left, Not even a family, Starlight flies to cloudsdale and tries to find happiness. She finds a small filly outside of Cloudsdale when she arrives. The filly had no home, family, or friends as well as couldnt fly. Starlight would have helped but her pain was too great. Instead, Starlight took advantage of the little filly. Star abused and neglected the filly we would soon discover was Scootaloo (yea yea... scootabuse. Its the whole reason I made Starlight. She would abuse her instead of Rainbow Dash. no worries.. it has a happy end) Starlight will be in other Fanfiction with more Major roles such as clearing her name as a bringer of evil and helping royal guards save the captive and tortured Mane six.(NOTE: It says HELP. she doesnt actually save the mane six. she isnt powerful enough to do it. she is a normal pony afterall) I know.. I left her CutieMark story out... comment if you guys wanna know about it... I put LOTS of thought of what she would end up being.. so please dont bash her... we all get creative sometimes. Thanks for reading. |
| Starlight42896 #905881 5 months ago |
sorry... was late on posting... I am slow |
| P0ny_News #905891 5 months ago |
Too much "..." in the last sentence, guy. Don't use them, they're wearing out very quickly.
Also, "description"? Sounds more like "an idea for a fanfic" if you ask me. It looks like you have an idea for a possibly interesting fanfic, but that description you wrote is spoiling it. One last thing: try to be neutral when writing a description. It's the character we're interested in, not your opinion about scootaloo, a chicken, or who you based her on. And I think that's all. For now. |
| Starlight42896 #905903 5 months ago |
*Rereads through the whole thing* I must be dumb. Im good at story telling, Trust me on that. Character descriptions. well, I suck at describing characters. I will try hard not to leave anything out. ask me anything and I will answer for my character. no troll comments please. |
| P0ny_News #905913 5 months ago |
Also, just in case: I'm not trolling.
When people are offering you review on your story, they'll probably give you two things: "facts", and "opinions". Facts are neutral and objective, like typos, strange speech patterns, and uninteresting characters. That's what I tried to wrote. Opinions are personal, and it's more about "I don't like how you wrote it", or maybe even "I don't like your story". Most often, people aren't aware of that, but they're mixing facts and opinions. Criticizing a story, or any work is a difficult job, because the writer has to listen to criticism, while keeping on writing. But if the critic fails to give you a good review, it's up to you to choose between facts and opinions. And consequences can be awful, as for a story can quickly "jump the shark" if the writer listens to opinions, and decide to change his story to please the audience. Writing is a hard job, and it's very ungrateful. Sometimes, you'll see awful fanfics, that you dislike, being considered as godlike fanfics. And sometimes, you'll read very good fanfics, but due to the writer having poor self-confidence, it'll be deleted or buried under other works. Which leads me to my point: I'm trying to give you facts. Ignore them or accept them, but I'm not trolling. Well, not yet. I'VE BEEN SERIOUS FOR TOO LONG! CHEESE FOR EVERYONE! |
| AppleJackFrost #905919 5 months ago |
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| P0ny_News #905925 5 months ago |
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| Starlight42896 #905931 5 months ago |
Yes. I know. I can take criticism. Ive been a member of a small music site called Punk-o-Matic and have been making some alright music for almost two years. some hate it, others love it. either way, It makes me better the more people hate. YAY FOR AWESOME COMMUNITIES! Im liking ponibooru so far. such helpful users |
| Lium #905951 5 months ago |
That's bad and you should feel bad. |
| Anonymous #906040 5 months ago |
Oh fuck, OCs. |
| WhiteLycan #906060 5 months ago |
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| Atiarotias #906064 5 months ago |
^oh cheese-god wut |
| Cockonut #906375 5 months ago |
Be an attention whore somewhere else, please. |
| Starlight42896 #907575 5 months ago |
^well excuse me for trying to provide as much information for my character as possible. At least I'm not shoving this character down your throats like tumblr artists. I have no plans to keep this character alive for too long. We all have messed with the pony creator. I was one of the brave ones who showed my character off. Thank you for clicking my picture and at least reading my comments. |
| Anonymous #907585 5 months ago |
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