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| seirio #902459 5 months ago |
Any critiques and such? I think i'm improving. Also
SHAMELESS SELF-PROMOTION :V |
| Spitfire #902507 5 months ago |
Pretty good job! For the most part the only thing that sticks out for fixing would be the front legs, I feel they should be a bit lower and more cylindrical at the top- where her shoulders are it should be kind of sloped, and on the underside of it, maybe not indented inward.
See how her leg is thinner at the top and then widens to the hoof? 
And the elbows and shoulders are done with rounded lines. Hope that helped a bit, sorry if English isn't great. It's a pretty well done picture! |
| Spitfire #902521 5 months ago |
Crap, I didn't realize how big that second picture was. |
| seirio #902556 5 months ago |
Thanks Spitfire!
Any and all critique is welcomed. I feel this is one of my best ones, and I only started drawing seriously 4 weeks ago! |