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| HeinousActsZX #901432 5 months ago |
Ah, crap.
Reposting. |
| HeinousActsZX #901436 5 months ago |
Oh wait, it's fixed.
Based off >>115648 I wrote it script-style 'cause I imagined it as a cartoon in my head, and this was the best way for me to visualize it. This is the first writing I've done since I wrote Pokémon fanfiction when I was seven. Please comment. By the way, I still need a title for this whole thing. Suggestions? |
| ZePassionateOne #901460 5 months ago |
Hmmmm...I dunno. I mean, it's great, but I feel that I'm reading a script instead of a fanfiction for some reason. |
| Harlequin_Jester #901462 5 months ago |
We're basically writing a mosaic novel, and I love it. |
| HeinousActsZX #901469 5 months ago |
@Ze
That was my intention. |
| Draconequus #901475 5 months ago |
This is actually a pretty accurate representation of me.
Unattentive as fuck. Still, really great. I wanna see what happens next. And I forgot who, but someone said it should be called Fallout: Ponibooru. |
| Draconequus #901480 5 months ago |
I now actually want to record these lines, put them with some animation and make a scene type thing.
That'd be awesome. |
| Mushi #901481 5 months ago |
O_o' pynky is a killer |
| HeinousActsZX #901490 5 months ago |
@Dracon
It's not an "After the end" story, though. It's just a wasteland. |
| Mushi #901494 5 months ago |
but that is cool, i think i will keep reading |
| ZePassionateOne #901496 5 months ago |
@Heinous: Must be just me, I'm kinda used to read scripts in a dull maner for some reason. |
| CogWeaver #901498 5 months ago |
So let me get this all straight: There's 5 "factions", a GIF faction, a Hero faction, a Fave faction, a Royal faction, and an unaligned "faction". And different users on here are being lined up within one of each of these, right?
So...going off of what I know about the show our characters are based off of...the 5 factions are like the 5 elements that need a 6th to connect and unify them all. Is that where this is going, or am I being silly? |
| DeeperMadness #901502 5 months ago |
I am now disturbed by the addition of PynkyPy in this fanfic.
Also, Heinous, you did not just make me say "Alright". XD  |
| Draconequus #901505 5 months ago |
@Cog
That's kinda a stretch. I think it's basically just a "Every faction for themselves" thing. @Heinous Well, I'm out of ideas. |
| HeinousActsZX #901510 5 months ago |
@cog
Wasn't my plan, no. |
| HeinousActsZX #901518 5 months ago |
@Deeper
You think this is bad? You should've seen my original characterization of Roboshi. |
| CogWeaver #901526 5 months ago |
kk, just putin' that out there.
In any case, this seems to be pretty darn epic. Is anyone else gettin' included in the story that's not already listed? |
| HeinousActsZX #901530 5 months ago |
@Cog
Check the link I threw up there. |
| Dragoon #901557 5 months ago |
I like the script style writing. Makes it more imaginative for me |
| DeeperMadness #901578 5 months ago |
I was going to suggest that you could have this set up in another country, but then it dawned on me that the local news outlet (newspaper or something) is called "Equestria Daily". Mind you, looking at how open Apploosa is and how often they have to take trains on long journeys, it strikes me that there's an awful lot of open ground around Ponyville and the other cities. You could have it neighbouring one of the other big built up areas, or even come up with some fictional locations. |
| HeinousActsZX #901588 5 months ago |
@Deeper
I'm gonna work towards that. This is really an experiment to see if I've even got what it takes to write. |
| NightJack #901604 5 months ago |
Hay! I know where that castle is, should I go and help...
Will i get anything out of it... I could send the Pinkie clones but... |
| HeinousActsZX #901625 5 months ago |
@NightJack
Sorry, in my story, you're still in your lab. In fact, you're in trouble with the Police Force after one too many experiments. |
| NightJack #901633 5 months ago |
^ Why do you think I said I could send my Pinkie clones. |
| HeinousActsZX #901640 5 months ago |
Pinkie Pie doesn't exist in this universe.
None of the canon characters do. |
| NightJack #901652 5 months ago |
Heinous, have you forgotten I have an interdimensional portal my lab. |
| CogWeaver #901654 5 months ago |
That...didn't really answer my question, Heinous. |
| HeinousActsZX #901684 5 months ago |
@NightJack
Not in this universe. @Cog To be honest, I really don't know yet, so I can't answer. |
| marioandsonic #901991 5 months ago |
Death by Snu-Snu? |
| AppleJackFrost #902593 5 months ago |
But how can I serve Master Pelicorn? |
| Dysons_Fear #903317 5 months ago |
This is great. Keep going please. |
| PVRyohei #904900 5 months ago |
Ponibooru is so amazing it's getting it's own fic. You're making history happen, Heinous! |
| HeinousActsZX #905126 5 months ago |
>small figure
>medium sized I'll get better, presumably. |
| Draconequus #905130 5 months ago |
@AppleJackFrost
I don't know. I hope you get included into the story somehow. |