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| Roboshi #831511 6 months ago |
just a note, Mare is an older female. Big mac would be a stallion. |
| RepentantAnon #831513 6 months ago |
it was ok, no glaring issues. would probably work better as an epilogue, than as a standalone story though. as is, it just introduces a problem, which is immediately resolved, not the most interesting of things to read. |
| HumanaeVitae #831542 6 months ago |
Kind of ends like a Saturday morning cartoon, but hey its pony, what do you expect? |
| Prominence #831554 6 months ago |
What Repentant said. I'd prefer to see this as the end to a slightly longer story. Not that much longer- 1, 2 chapters, tops. |
| Posey #831561 6 months ago |
Dragons and ponies interbreeding? That's odd. |
| PVRyohei #831651 6 months ago |
Actually, this is already kind of an epilogue for a serie of pics, but it would be nice if it was a proper fic. I wouldn't mind writing it myself, but I never wrote clop before, and with my lack of discipline it would take weeks. |
| Silver #831653 6 months ago |
This is so horrifying! Spike is being forced into marriage, and Applebloom is forced into motherhood, simply because they fooled around?
Equestria is creepy shit. |
| Anonymous #831757 6 months ago |
Spike: "Hey, uh, problem. My species has no paternal instincts."
Mac: "Grow some." Spike: "WELP! Time to go into torpor then. Brb 20 yrs." |
| Crazael #831833 6 months ago |
PVR, you don't have to write clop, just write the events that lead up to it, then skip to after. |
| davisjimmy #831875 6 months ago |
I would read the fic. Maybe even an aftermath of Spike and 'Bloom having to adjust to the newborn. |
| PVRyohei #831992 6 months ago |
@Crazael
Well, I might as well give it a shot, it would be a good chance to try my hand at clopfics. I'm going to finish Homestuck in 2 or 3 days, and then I'll probably try it. |
| davisjimmy #832021 6 months ago |
PVR,
AWESOME. |
| Littlecabbit #832030 6 months ago |
Ooh~ I'm gonna want to read that too PVR XD |
| Anonymous #832088 6 months ago |
Isnt Bad, Short consist, quite disturbing but certanly entertaining |
| PVRyohei #832160 6 months ago |
Hmmm, it seems like there's more people interested than I expected. Well, I'm feeling motivated now. I can't promisse a date, but I will get it done. |
| davisjimmy #832901 6 months ago |
Sweet |
| Anonymous #846345 6 months ago |
I... am... completely... mindblown.
If I were Big Mac I would buck the SHIT OUTTA SPIKE! He, a baby dragon, did it with AppleBloom, practically a baby herself, and got her pregnant! I WOULD'VE BEEN PISSED! D:< |
| davisjimmy #846775 6 months ago |
^ - They're teens in this story (it takes place few years in the future). While not adults, they're not exactly kids here. |