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| Calpain #823168 6 months ago |
Comic by Cenit-v for the December Draw Off
Recommended music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CTjDCRAVo-Y&feature=youtu.be |
| NightJack #823221 6 months ago |
I had to go and tell Cenit-v that he put "his" in place of "her" in two spots. |
| PonyPon #823227 6 months ago |
I would love to read this, but the print is way too small to see.
PS:I just realized the most likely place for Trixie to live is "a cart down by the river". |
| Anonymous #823282 6 months ago |
Could be absolutely amazing if the grammar didn't skullfuck me with a rusty screwdriver. |
| Anonymous #823300 6 months ago |
^This. Art and story are fantastic, but the grammar... Ugh, I'm no Nazi but you have to draw the line somewhere. The least he could have done was grab a proofreader. |
| Anonymous #823321 6 months ago |
I was torn between crying at the genuinely good story and laughing at the grammar. |
| Anonymous #823327 6 months ago |
In fact, someone should take a shot at correcting all the grammar here, then we'd have a truly rockin' comic. |
| Anonymous #823361 6 months ago |
Ruined by infantile grammar. Tis' a shame, this is otherwise a real gem. |
| Anonymous #823367 6 months ago |
Ah, give him a break. He's Mexican, he's clearly still learning English! You can't expect people to always be the best there is at a language.
Although if you really wanted to, you could try sending him a proper transcription and see if he wants to make another version. Or she. I don't really know. |
| Anonymous #823373 6 months ago |
Well, fuck! I'd rather he write it in Spanish, I can read Spanish! |
| NotThatAnyoneCares #823434 6 months ago |
There's only so much that you can cover behind "English is my second language". I have NO idea what the fuck was going on in this comic. |
| NightJack #823516 6 months ago |
You guys really have a hard time understanding it?
I see the grammar problems but the only thing that bugged was what I said before, other then that I understood it just find. |
| moku5 #825294 6 months ago |
Wow, the english sorta sucked, but it was still damn good enough to create tears ; _ ; |
| Jacks_Smirking_Revenge #826306 6 months ago |
Listening to La Cucaracha while reading this may have not been the best thing given the subject of this comic. |
| Bernoullis_Principle #843005 6 months ago |
I really, REALLY wish I could tell what was going on but I couldn't because of the writing. |