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| Ware #815447 6 months ago |
My take on Twilight as a human, feel free to comment on things than can be improve or added so I can add it in the next time I drew her again. |
| HeinousActsZX #815463 6 months ago |
Well, the face seems a little big, but everything else looks really good.
Pony Twilight is adorable. |
| Bronidas #815620 6 months ago |
She couldn't look more librarian even if she tried. |
| Mayclore #815760 6 months ago |
I agree, I think there's a bit too much cheek, but otherwise well done. |
| Nightweaver20xx #815799 6 months ago |
I d'awwwed at the horn boop. |
| Anonymous #816075 6 months ago |
Ummmm, "man face". Sorry, that's all I can see. |
| Ware #816097 6 months ago |
@075
Could you be more constructive? That would help a lot.(no need to apologies I did asked for opinion so it's cool) |
| Anonymous #816376 6 months ago |
If her face was less angular (curves = women, angles = men, after all), she'd look more feminine, but this take it actually good!
Maybe throw something in that indicates she's a unicorn (I saw a more recent upload that featured her having a pen behind her ear to give her the look), but other than that, solid artwork, and a convincing human shape. Keep at it! |
| Anonymous #816500 6 months ago |
Anon376 again: Or... you could try make her lips more prominent. |
| Anonymous #816997 6 months ago |
The jaw seems too strong. That's more an Applejack jaw. I like the eyes.
Hmm, you know, a big thing that seems wrong with the face is that it has too much length and width. I think you need to go either or with Twilight. Long and narrow or wider and not so long. |
| Ware #818001 6 months ago |
@Heinous, Bronidas, Mayclore, NWeaver
Thanks for the comment guys, appreciate it *nods* @376 Indicate she's a unicorn Now that's something for me to think about. lips more prominent I've try my hand on that but somehow it doesn't click with the image or I just need to give it a try at it again. @997 strong jaw Aight, will fix it. face too much length and width Thanks for the input, I'll try and see which of the option gives the best result (least thru my perception) Thanks again for your comment guys, will use it as a future references. |
| Anonymous #818075 6 months ago |
Glad to help, Ware. Thank you for uploading your art for us to enjoy! |
| Ware #818809 6 months ago |
I should be thanking you guys for giving me a reason to *smile* |