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| MortalKombatFan1 #792390 7 months ago |
Nice. But is that Soarin or someone else? |
| Anonymous #792437 7 months ago |
I like to believe that offscreen, there is a line of people wanting to lie on Octavia's lap.
She has swag, y'know. |
| LordBristle #792439 7 months ago |
I think that's Soarin. |
| QuelloScelto #792466 7 months ago |
Actually is Spike...i was on the streaming when it was made |
| SpikeSpiegel #792552 7 months ago |
SpikexOctavia?
Somehow, I see a humanized Twilight with a baseball bat just off-screen. Good job, John. |
| Anonymous #792557 7 months ago |
Indistinguishable humanized characters by JJ? It's not like they all have the same face or anytOH WAIT THEY DO. |
| Anonymous #792564 7 months ago |
@792437
That word is so overused it's lost all meaning. |
| SpikeSpiegel #792600 7 months ago |
'That was quite a workout,' he looked up at his tutor's lovely eyes as she stroked his hair affectionately, 'so how did I do, Teach?'
Octavia laughed, planting a small kiss on his forehead. 'You're getting better. Thought I wonder why you'd spend so much time on the harp. You never did seem like the type of person to be into classical.' 'Underneath this rustic exterior beats the heart of Bach's greatest affecionado.' 'Really, now?' 'Not really.' He grinned. 'Do I get points for trying?' She laughed. 'For trying.' She kissed him quietly and the moon shone outside. |
| Anonymous #792616 7 months ago |
@SpikeSpiegel
Keep your shitty fanfics to yourelf. |
| Anonymous #792822 7 months ago |
Another outta left field ship....
And SpikeSpiegal, don't listen to ^ I enjoy the way you can concoct a short narrative out of one image |
| LightningLazer #792876 7 months ago |
@SpikeSpiegel
Quite creative. Did anyone ever tell you, that you would make a great writer? |
| Anonymous #793512 7 months ago |
@SpikeSpiegel more, please |
| Anonymous #793714 7 months ago |
@LightningLazer
Yes, because the world needs another My Immortal. Don't quit your day job, SpikeSpiegel. |
| SpikeSpiegel #794369 7 months ago |
@Anon714
Don't mean to be rude, but don't you have any other comparisons? I don't mind the criticism, but I'd rather people cite something worthwhile instead of comparing to the same unintelligible standard every time someone has something bad to say about a fanfic. It doesn't show criticism, it just shows a lack of thorough reading of all possible avenues on the part of the reviewer/critique and does not offer anything to assist in the growth of a writer. I'm all for people saying my works suck; because truly, everyone has an opinion, and I respect that. But really, a broader scheme of reference would've been more helpful. tl;dr: Burn if you must, but use better quality fuel or you're just polluting more the necessary. In other news, I like the picture very much. |
| MyLittleJosieph #794815 7 months ago |
I'm not really feeling it with these two. There just isn't enough for either of them to work off of. Besides, I like his Octy/Vinyl pics better. Also I've been reading "Allegrezza" and it kinda firmly planted them as OTP in my head. It also turned Lyra into a complete jerk but that's another matter altogether. |
| Draconequus #794839 7 months ago |
@Spike, great fic. Ended a little abruptly though. |