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Anonymous
#758666
7 months ago
Oh god, I want moar
zanzibar
#759042
7 months ago
There's a SPACESHIP full of pinkie pie's?
Anonymous
#761757
7 months ago
^ AWESOME, isn't it?
Wheezie_Moonflower
#761828
7 months ago
Let me the first one to say...

NO.

It doesn't sound right. I remember reading a fanfic of something where there's this thing full of clones of this one character. Possibly an evil man, since no sane person would work for him or something.

At any rate, this is too Mary Sue-ish to me.
Anonymous
#761837
7 months ago
The coordinate axis labeling in the holographic display is incorrect, at least according to the widely accepted Cartesian standard. The x- and y- axis should be flipped (or the z-axis flipped). Also, the axis labeling should be flipped horizontally.
Anonymous
#761843
7 months ago
*axes--before anyone corrects
dx11
#762009
7 months ago
@wheezie_moonflower
can you tell me what aspect of the story makes it sound mary sue?