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| Anonymous #723117 7 months ago |
Part 1 >>54604
So, yeah. Here’s the second part of that writing experiment I did way back. Even more embarrassed I wrote this than I am about the first part; you can probably see why. Part 1 was an experiment in writing a romance scene, so it was logical from my perspective to take a shot at writing a sex scene next. Feel free to flame me, I probably deserve it. Couple of notes: one, I’m assuming Rainbow is about three foot four from her hooves to the top of her head. (right at a meter for you metric folks) That’s a little under average height for E. sapiens, mostly because I’m assuming that pegasi are slightly smaller and lighter-built than unicorns, who are slightly smaller and lighter-built than earth ponies. Dash here is about 120 pounds, (~54kg) heavier than normal for a pegasus because she’s basically a solid bundle of muscle and bone. So that’s the size issue. Second, when she’s referring to the ‘stiffies,’ she basically means she’s overstimulated (yeah, they’ve only gotten to first base, but they’ve spent an entire afternoon there) and is essentially suffering from the pegasus equivalent of blue balls. The erogenous zones under and between her wings are currently so sensitive as a result that she’s having problems with autostimulation, and if she attempts to fly in that state she’ll barely get off the ground before triggering her own arousal response, having her wings go stiff, and having to glide back down. Third, her rather frank appraisal of Lero’s body (yes, the human character is named Lero. It’s short for Bellerophon, because mythological jokes are best jokes) may seem out of place in an individual who’s been as nervous as she’s been, and in a human that would be the case. Remember, though, her home culture thinks nothing of nudity, so she’s not uncomfortable at all with making judgments like that. So that’s that. As I said, feel free to flame me. |
| marioandsonic #723128 7 months ago |
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| Anonymous #723143 7 months ago |
tl:dr |
| Anonymous #723154 7 months ago |
tl:dr though somewhat interested...
Is it any good? |
| Shaky #723188 7 months ago |
You know, if it's tl;dr for you, just read the last sentence, because this is one of those times where it works. |
| gafynoP #723512 7 months ago |
It was enjoyable, but the penetration part was rather disappointing...
You took 34985 paragraphs to describe how her wings were being rubbed and ended with "he entered her, it lasted a surprisingly long time, she orgasmed yet again. The end." I understand this is supposed to be a romance, not something you should read with your dick in hand, but the ending feels anti-climaxing since everything up to that part had a lot of details and really good writing. Also, anyone who cares to read a gigantic wall of text about human_on_pony_action was already at least fantasizing about fucking ponies anyway, so there is no reason to be embarrassed around here. |
| Doctor_Whooves #723803 7 months ago |
Yeah, I gather a decent number of people here have at least given a few moments thought to what it might be like to be intimate with one of the characters, lol.
Besides, you're an anon; even if you had real cause to be embarrassed, there's no need. |
| Kein #723846 7 months ago |
Jesus Christ...
nope.avi ctrl+w |
| Stank #724346 7 months ago |
As the last one, the exploration of pony mores and cultural differences are what's most interesting.
Now for a sequel where we see the reactions of the mane 6 and other ponies etc. etc. |
| Doctor_Whooves #724353 7 months ago |
Kein doesn't like it 'cuz this isn't about Celestia. :( |
| Monkey_Zombie #725690 7 months ago |
I liked it, not all that sexy but it adds some gunpowder in my headcanon.
Put more emotion into how they are feeling and keep up the good work. |
| Klutzybear #725877 7 months ago |
This was SURPRISINGLY well-done. Sure the ending was a bit quick, but I really like the romantic connection between Dash and the man and the emotions playing out through their connection.
To me, it was more meaningful then simple sex. And that whole "Lack of stallions" explaination was REALLY interesting. I never really thought about that until this morning. |
| Ssargon #728030 7 months ago |
I likes. Honestly the way the sex was rushed is kind of refreshing to me, it's a romantic story first and foremost. The way their thoughts are detailed in this and the first part are also wonderful, shows how different humans and ponies truly are and why that's so exciting. |
| ChickNeighney #728755 7 months ago |
That was quite good. I don't much care for sex scenes, but I guess this was still good, because it was given context and and wasn't all that graphic and such. I can only hope that you plan to do more, good sir. |
| Anonymous #738305 7 months ago |
Heh, glad some folks liked it. I admit, erotica isn't really where my talent lies, so *shrug*. This was primarily an experiment, as I said earlier, as well as a way to jot down some differences between H. sapiens and E. sapiens. Sex is fairly important to pretty much every creature that has it, after all, so forming a decent understanding of this species's practices and attitudes was helpful for me as an author, even if I didn't use it in any of my actual stories. (Heh, and please don't mistake me for my characters. Lero here is not me, and isn't supposed to represent me)
And I do confess to being a bit of a romantic, so I lean a little toward "lovemaking" rather than just "fucking." |
| Stank #738329 7 months ago |
^
Are you going to write anymore concerning these two? |
| YouCloppinToFoalsBro #738365 7 months ago |
Ahem.
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| Detective_Chmilewsky #739770 7 months ago |
Hell if this was a book I would hide under somewhere and read it. |
| AdamNovagen #740377 7 months ago |
Well Anon, here I am again. I got linked here by a friend of mine, and a good thing he did too, or I would've missed this absolute gem.
As usual, your narrative is up to snuff, but you've absolutely outdone yourself with the random interjections of I C WAT U DID THAR humour. Rarity's catalogue of dirty jokes? Well let's face it, we all knew it had to be; i c wat u did thar. No less than two point-blank statements of Dash being a heterosexual? Droll, very droll; I applaud you, and i c wat u did thar. And let's not forget Dash's uncalculated remark, "You must have a lot of fillyfoolers where you come from." I'm not lying when I say that I literally slapped my knee at that one. The romance was very much up to par with the first installment; you have created a beautiful relationship between these two characters. The sex was... Well, I'll be honest, it was weird to me, if for no other reason than the fact that of course I find nothing whatever about pony anatomy attractive, cartoon or otherwise. The story itself was so well-constructed, however, and the activities so thoughtful - the very epitomy of "lovemaking," to my mind - that I enjoyed the story immensely on the whole, with or without interspecial intercourse. It's true what many have already remarked on: the penetration did indeed feel rushed. I'm sure I know why though; I can imagine you even now, typing furiously, your mind reeling with thoughts of "OH GOD, I'M ACTUALLY WRITING THIS, WHAT'S GOING ON OH WHY DID I EVER DECIDE TO DO THIS." XD All in all, five stars. Cool story bro, and I mean that quite literally. :D |
| Anonymous #745168 7 months ago |
@Stank Probably not. As I said, I wrote this as an experiment, not really a story; it was just a way to codify some species differences. I admit, it's something of an odd way to do so, but still.
@YouCloppinToFoalsBro Heh, thanks. @DetectiveChmilewsky Glad you liked it! @AdamNovagen Thanks, and I do like to slip things in to see if people will notice. I was wondering how long it would be before someone mentioned that I'd made Dash not only straight as an arrow, but straight in a culture where that's regarded as somewhat unusual. (Honestly, I write her as being straight anyway, but it normally doesn't come into focus) And, honestly, I'm not a xenophile either. I've never been physically attracted to anything nonhuman, so this was a bit... odd to write. My excuse for the cultural comparison that played out was that this scene (and was the entire purpose of writing this in the first place) was between two individuals who were seriously into one another, but recognize that they came from totally different cultures, and were being very cautious because they were both afraid of doing something wrong. And yes, that's a fairly accurate summary of my state of mind (with an added dose of oh god why) and is most of the reason it took me so long to upload this second part. Glad you enjoyed it! |
| Detective_Chmilewsky #754094 7 months ago |
Do you plan on doing a third story? |
| Anonymous #762856 7 months ago |
I sure hope so. |
| Anonymous #764418 7 months ago |
@Detective_Chmilewsky Not any time in the near future. Like I said, I regarded this more as a set of notes in narrative format than a story per se, plus I'm a bit burned out at the moment since I finished my last project. (Which turned out to be in excess of 85k words, far more than I'd intended when I started it) Hell, this turned out longer than I expected; the whole thing is around 13k words, and this is just two scenes!
If I get bit by the writing bug again, I might do more, but not in the immediate foreseeable future. |
| bj97632 #851388 6 months ago |
I love this....*tears* |
| Anonymous #940929 5 months ago |
this is the oposite of a bad porno... |
| Anonymous #1023398 5 months ago |
I love how you swapped human and equestrian culture. Have you considered posting this on Clopfic.heroku.com? Its where most clopfics are posted and I promise this is much higher quality than some of the things that make it on that site. That said, please right more. I love this story. |
| thulsadoon #1053452 4 months ago |
Wonderful! Well thought out and very well written. You've only touched on what could be the differences between Equestrian and human culture and I would love to read more on the subject. The clopping is just the frosting on the cupcake as it were. Too often the comments are nothing but a variation of tl;dr, but that just goes to show those commentors wouldn't know a good story if it snuck up on them, tied them down, and read to them! Please, by all means, write some more, write often, but just WRITE! I do hope you continue this particular story in the near future even if you have to leave out anymore clopping scenes, because, all ego stroking aside, you have the the makings of a very interesting story in the making. Keep up the good work. |
| Anonymous #1076366 4 months ago |
Uploader here. Heh, wow, thought discussion on this was done a long time ago. :-P Guess it's time for one of my traditional long-winded replies!
@bj97632 Glad you liked it! @Anon 0929 I'm going to assume you mean a literal inversion, I.E. way too much talking and not enough action! :-P @Anon 3398 Thanks! And no, I hadn't really considered posting this on there, because as erotica goes, this frankly isn't all that good. As I commented to the anon above you, it's sort of a literal inversion of a bad porno. The absurdity of that thought (inverting something bad and winding up with a result that's still bad)amuses me. :-D @thulsadoon Thank you! I enjoy worldbuilding and alien design, so this was kind of a fun little exercise for me. And the comments have actually been mostly quite positive and constructive, on both of these posts. I have actually written more on this brainstorming thingy, largely because due to the way I write writing a scene with characters that are genuinely happy is far more pleasant for me than writing one with characters that are, for example, in the midst of first contact with the Tyranids. (A process colloquially known as "breakfast") I haven't posted it anywhere because 1) this board isn't really the proper venue, especially since most of the scenes are longer than the ones I've already posted, 2) some of the scenes are quite explicit, moreso than this one, and 3) while some scenes are quite explicit, others are completely non-sexual, running into the aforementioned problem of posting it on a more sexually-oriented venue. I really don't want to put it on my FFN or FiMfiction account, for reasons that are probably obvious. Really, it was just something I did for fun anyway, and I doubt anyone would want to read a conversation with Lero, Dash, Twilight, and Applejack that's pretty much all worldbuilding, or my attempt at giving an alien species a noncryptic ovulatory cycle that didn't do what Beating the Heat did and make its sufferers become almost nonsapient. (I think that's sloppy alien design, personally, and I didn't like it when Turtledove did it to the Race either, no matter how laughable the lizards were) ...I rather lost my train of thought, so I'll wrap this up here! |
| Anonymous #1087545 4 months ago |
Do Want! |
| Anonymous #1087576 4 months ago |
You could post it under a different name if you don't want your main account to be associated with the story. |
| Anonymous #1091094 4 months ago |
I've wondered what it would be like to eat them, herr doktar. I'm a eurofag, ponies is food first for us, then foreplay. :v |
| AdamNovagen #1096723 4 months ago |
@AnonAuthor This discussion will be done when we no longer breathe. ;D |
| Dysons_Fear #1102243 4 months ago |
This is awesome once again. Hadn't realized that the followup had been posted. Something made me think of the huge manatee the other day and I loved the first part so I searched and was overjoyed. I believe I speak nothing but the truth when I say that many here would love to read a conversation with Lero, Dash, Twilight, and Applejack that's pretty much all world building et cetera or anything else you have based around these two pieces. Please, we love your writing and these first two pieces make us hungry for more. |
| thulsadoon #1132972 4 months ago |
"I have actually written more on this brainstorming thingy". Where?! Stop teasing us and post this for Celestia's sake! You musn't down play your own work too much. Being humble has it's place in writing but in the case of FanFiction good authors are few and far between so when one comes along who can spin not only a yarn but a story either toot your own horn or we will for you. And Brother, we can blow it a lot harder than you can. If posting your work is such a bother let me suggest that you post under a pseudo name and claim that you're posting for someone who must keep their anonymity. Also you might decide to post on the ClopFic Directory at http://clopfic.heroku.com/. If you do decide to post there you will only raise the quality of that site. Some of the writers there are good but the vast majority flunked english literature the hard way. Please, let all the positive feed back you're recieving convince you that your work is indeed worth posting and then leave a comment here where you decide to post them. Ok, yes, I admit it. I'm trying to stroke your ego, but it's for a purely selfish reason. I've plowed through so many horrible "stories" that when a talented writer comes along with a nice slant on the FiM franchise I just have to try and convice them to stick around and post more, more, MOAAAAAR.
@ Dysons_Fear: Oh the Huge MANATEE! It was just aweful! Flaming bits of manatee and blubber everywhere. Though on a positive note the cleanup slash bbq was a complete success. That critter fed four counties for a whole month I've been told. @AnonAuthor: Keep on writing! Your Princess demands it. She couldn't find you due to you NOT posting under a regular name so she was forced to send this royal command to me. I can still hear the echo's. The Royal Canterlot Voice in an enclosed area hurts. I don't want to go through that again. Before I forget I do recall reading Beating the Heat. I found it to be silly. The author just taking something we've all thought about and then taking it to the logical and perverted conclusion to the Nth degree. |
| Anonymous #1134592 4 months ago |
Holy... Shit... Wow, there MUST be more like this. |
| vision #1140679 4 months ago |
http://i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/265/035/7ce.gif |
| Anonymous #1142740 4 months ago |
Wait a minute... If a mare's tail twitching is a sign of arousal, does that mean Pinkie gets off on falling objects? |
| Anonymous #1142820 4 months ago |
Crap I missed the bbq! |
| Dysons_Fear #1142838 4 months ago |
damn you, random logout! |
| Anonymous #1155747 3 months ago |
Oh, my, my internet dies in two separate ways and there's more discussion! I'll be brief; hopefully I can type this and hit "submit" before it dies on me again. I will glance around and see if there's somewhere I could post what I've written. Assuming I find one, I'll need to go back over the draft and edit it. Once I'm done, assuming I find a place to post, I'll put a link here; it'll probably take a week or two, since I do have other things going on and my internet is spotty as hell.
Oh, and @Anon 740: different kind of twitch. (Though as I mentioned in the previous thread, I prefer to ignore Pinkie Sense :-P) Pinkie's was a more rapid, spastic vertical twitch, whereas this was a slower side-to-side motion. Though, you know, Pinkie's strange enough that I wouldn't discount anything. |
| Anonymous #1158352 3 months ago |
You could post it in Fimfiction.net |
| Anonymous #1158969 3 months ago |
A lot of 4chan greentext writers are using pastebin.com to hold their stories. |
| Dysons_Fear #1176661 3 months ago |
Woo! |
| Anonymous #1203311 3 months ago |
Normally I hate "human in equestria" stories, but this story (both chapters) is a cut above.
Intellectually appealing take on pony culture, with a great deal of thought put into the dynamics of romantic relationships. All in all, a genuinely well written piece, like the first chapter. And funny too, lots of well timed humor. Even the tags made me laugh. Criticism - Excellent buildup, background and foreplay; but, as others have pointed out you kinda glossed over the end when you should have gone for the big crescendo. Room for improvement for your next story. Speaking of next story, it breaks my heart to hear that you won't be writing more chapters, and because you submitted this as Anonymous I can't even find more things that you have written in the past or will write in the future. Don't know why you're ashamed of it anyways. Most people who write fanfics AT ALL would be happy to have even 20% of your writing prowess. I say, while posting as Anonymous... but only because I have no account. I never thought I'd WANT to comment on anything. But it's frustrating to see that you're embarrassed about writing something this good. TL:DR - Good Job. Write More. Tell me where to find your other stuff. |
| Anonymous #1203614 3 months ago |
....huh. Never thought I'd see a fic of this nature done so well. More? Please? <3 |
| Anonymous #1207126 3 months ago |
Uploader here.
Argh. I'm evidently really damn bad at keeping my promises. And I hate breaking promises! I'd intended to find someplace to post this, but I've been unusually busy lately (plus ME3 stealing my attention and free time) and haven't managed to finish editing, let alone messing with uploading locations. (Thanks to Anon 969, BTW; Pastebin looks rather promising to my admittedly hasty examination) I've finished ME3 and I've got some free time this weekend; hopefully I'll be able to finish editing and find a place to upload. There's a total of five scenes beyond this one, but I warn anyone reading, you will almost certainly be disappointed. Keep your expectations low! @Anon 352 Heh, I don't really want this kind of thing associated with my FiMfiction account. @Dysons_Fear Heh, I appreciate the enthusiasm, but I'm almost certain you'll be disappointed. @Anon 311 Thanks for the input! Yeah, the end of the second scene was a bit rushed; I'm completely unfamiliar with the genre. That's what experiments are for, after all! I think you may have misinterpreted some of my comments above; I am trying to get the other scenes (like these two, they're far to haphazard for me to dignify with the label "chapter") edited and uploaded somewhere, but I just haven't had the time. (Or, for that matter, a title, ha ha.) I'm hoping to get it done this weekend. (Thank Cthulhu that my Internet connection seems to have settled down!) @Anon 614: Thanks for the compliment! |
| Anonymous #1208300 3 months ago |
@AnonAuthor This story & its predecessor recently found their way onto the clopfic directory (http://clopfic.heroku.com/) and opened to rave reviews from the comments section. I personally found this story to be wonderful, blending world building, romance, and a touch of humor. It's more than a step above some of the stuff that makes its way onto the directory (since the directory is simply an amalgamation of everything out there) and I would love to see more from you.
If you'd like, you can edit the information on your story anonymously on the directory, and keep your anonymity while still getting your incredible work out to interested audiences. As far as upload sites, I would highly recommend Pastebin. It is anonymous, easy to use & read, just make sure that you do your editing *before* uploading it to Pastebin. Then you can take your nifty pastebin link and update the story's directory listing with each new chapter, and sit back and watch the adoring comments pile up for you :) |
| Anonymous #1231409 3 months ago |
So I'm the slowest slow that ever slowed a slow. There are simply not enough hours in the day; I need to live on a spaceship somewhere where I can set the day to have 30 hours so I'll have time for everything. Sorry I took so bloody long, guys, reformatting took forever since Pastebin doesn't let me use the italics I love so very, very much.
Here's the link to the whole thing. http://pastebin.com/T4qPq0Xq Be warned; you will be disappointed. Some bits of that are much more explicit and risque than anything here, and other bits are nothing but conversation. Like I said, this was a combination of notes, worldbuilding, and experimental writing for me, and at a certain point I just went "fuck it" and went whole hog with the erotica. |
| Anonymous #1231413 3 months ago |
@Anon8300: It has? I just glanced there, but I never gave this a title; what was it uploaded under? |
| Anonymous #1231632 3 months ago |
Xenophilia
http://clopfic.heroku.com/fics/911 |
| Anonymous #1232173 3 months ago |
Anonymous
#1231409 Now that. Was awesome! Except that having RD go in heat near the end was kinda silly to me. Why would a sapient creature have something that controls you like that? What would be the need? But the rest was so sweet, and we get more information about this version of equestria. Who knew Lyra was the sixth strongest mare ever? Anonymous #1231632 That name should change to "Oh the huge manatee." No one would get it, though. |
| Anonymous #1232701 3 months ago |
@AnonAuthor (Anon8300 here) Xenophilia seemed like a good name for the fic. I hope that you don't mind, I took the liberty of breaking the large pastebin into several more manageable chunks (breaking at the asterixes where it seemed appropriate that a chapter break would be) and updated the Clopfic Directory listing of the story with them (It currently has 6 total chapters, but let me know if you have any issues of where I placed breaks, and I would be glad to adjust anything for you).
If you decide to continue this story further (and I hope that you do as I truly enjoy your writing) you might consider making a 'nom de pony' specifically for this series (or any others in this universe), you could even create yourself a google account under the name and use google docs to upload your stories allowing you many more formatting options. If you would like to adjust any of the details on the Directory, feel free to do so, or if you'd prefer simply say so on these comments here and I will adjust the Directory entry for you. Hopefully we'll get to put a name to these great stories, but failing that at least we may get more stories in the same vein. @Anon2173. It's not actually so far fetched that a sapient creature might still go through a heat cycle if it evolved from a species that experienced a similar cycle. A sapient species may have far greater control over their reactions, but evolution has hardwired species to procreate and it isn't above dirty tricks like flooding your body with hormones to increase sex drive, and make you more appealing to the opposite sex. Even in humans, women experience hormonal changes during ovulation that increase their sex drive and, these changes in hormones even go so far as to slightly raise the pitch of their voice which has been shown to make them sound more appealing to men. A heat cycle is simply a much more intense version of the same thing, and could become prevalent in a species due to many environmental or even sociological factors. |
| Anonymous #1233115 3 months ago |
Uploader here
@Anon 1632: Ah, thanks. That's a better name, actually, I was struck by my inability to name anything well ever. @Anon 2173: Humans are actually extremely unusual in that human females have a cryptic ovulatory cycle; most species experience significant behavioral (and sometimes physical) alterations during their fertile period. Some of the factors that likely contribute to this behavior in humans wouldn't be present in a female-dominant species like E. sapiens, so I was going for a non-cryptic ovulatory cycle. I'm actually not certain what you mean by "controls you;" while it was certainly effecting Rainbow's behavior, I don't think it was controlling her. She was tense and horny, yeah, and her imagination was running on overdrive, but she wasn't worried about jumping some random stallion on the street or anything. It was more a case of someone with poor impulse control who knows they have poor impulse control trying to minimize the chances that she'll do something she'll regret later. Heh, and Lyra's not especially strong; she's just a really, really skilled martial artist. Magical Bruce Lee, if you will. :-P @Anon2701: Why, thanks! You went to more effort than I did! :-D And yeah, the name fits better. If I do write more, I'll update it there. Heh, on another note, as I was writing I realized that Pegasus Sparta could potentially be an absolutely fascinating setting to explore. |
| Anonymous #1233752 3 months ago |
@AnonAuthor It wasn't much effort at all, and I was glad to help :)
Careful, if you give us too many wonderful stories like this then we may clamor for more. ;) Pegasus Sparta certainly sounds like a great setting to explore with your brand of world development, but I hope that you still continue the story of RD & Lero. I find myself quite enamored with the pair, and I'd love to read more about his interactions with pony society. Perhaps even that naughty threesome that flittered through Dashie's mind in the last chapter ;) |
| Anonymous #1235362 3 months ago |
oh man, you have no idea how much i enjoyed this, dont ever feel ashamed of good work. please do another one |
| Anonymous #1239470 3 months ago |
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write more of this anonauthor! This story is GOOD and i have no idea why you're so embarrassed about claiming the story! |
| Anonymous #1241372 3 months ago |
I hope you're reading all the adoring comments on the Directory. It looks like you may be one of the best authors on the site. Looking forward to more stories from you! |
| Anonymous #1241410 3 months ago |
i love this story, lots of people do too, just look! you don't suck at all, you're a magnificent writer! please, make more, if only to give the story narrative conclusion. |
| Anonymous #1242140 3 months ago |
I don't normally comment but I just HAVE to tell you how much I freaking enjoyed this. I've just read parts 1 to 6 and it was superb! I loved your descriptions of not only the sex, but of actually having a loving relationship with Dash. The courtship, her friends, her feathers. I loved reading about the differences in their expectations and cultures, and how they adapted to them.
I'm really hoping you give us more! (anything!) Please don't sell yourself short! |
| Anonymous #1244777 3 months ago |
MOAR! WE NEED MOAR! MOOOAARRR!!! |
| Anonymous #1249168 3 months ago |
You could make a FiMFiction alt account for this story. I quite enjoy this story, but pastebin's formatting is terrible.
DOOOO EEEEET. |
| Anonymous #1249174 3 months ago |
Isn't that self insert shipping with canon character? |
| Anonymous #1249217 3 months ago |
Anonymous
#1249174 Didn't you read any of the comments? No, it's not. It doesn't even look like him. He just picked a random name and body type from a random generator. And isn't almost every shipping story involving a male a self-insert (even using actual characters counts) in some way? They might as well be, since there's no stallion lead and barely any characteristics to go by (except maybe Big Mac, but no one seems to get that he's shy). |
| Anonymous #1286532 2 months ago |
More please :( |
| thulsadoon #1300159 2 months ago |
What everyone (everypony?) hasn't realized yet is what happens when Pinky Pie not only goes on heat but a hard heat like Rainbow Dash is going through. I don't have to out run her, only you, and it's a lot easier to do that after I've tripped you. So yah, think of all the ramofications on the idea if a large majority of ponies go into heat at the same time. Think about it. Springtime is just another word for heat season. That is plausible considering we've all (well a lot of us anyways) agreed that ponies are very close to earth equines so that all the mares will syncronize their heat cycles. Be afraid. BE VERY AFRAID! Oh, and try not to be in front of me when all the males in Ponyville head for the hills. :D |
| Anonymous #1335427 2 months ago |
@9217 Well, the name isn't quite random...
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bellerophon |
| Anonymous #1374294 2 months ago |
Write more please :O |
| Anonymous #1416309 1 month ago |
MOAR! |
| Ponykin #1459934 3 weeks ago |
MOAR here! This fic is now 6 chapters with more to come!
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/27874/Xenophilia |
| Dysons_Fear #1479762 1 week ago |
Holy shit awesome! |