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| Anonymous #679805 8 months ago |
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| HeinousActsZX #679806 8 months ago |
Yeee...
No petrified ponies for me, thanks. |
| Anonymous #679812 8 months ago |
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| herooftime1000 #679840 8 months ago |
@Heinous
Don't like the story? |
| herooftime1000 #679950 8 months ago |
Here is the game intro so far.
http://www.mediafire.com/?a4stc85r4a9s6r1 |
| Anonymous #680316 8 months ago |
Hey, herooftime1000. This is the anon who offered language suggestions from last time. I looked at the dialogue from your last post; I'm no English major, but I noticed no errors in the text. |
| herooftime1000 #680320 8 months ago |
Oh, brilliant! Thanks for that! |
| Anonymous #680397 8 months ago |
Mind you, I'd suggest getting more eyes on your text, just in case I missed something. |