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| cyber95 #679399 8 months ago |
what's wrong with your faaaaaace |
| Fiasko #679410 8 months ago |
I don't knooooow!
Seriously though, if you could tell me what exactly looks wrong I'd be a very happy doodler :P |
| punctualjinx #679418 8 months ago |
Her nose is a bit square for one. |
| gashunk #679424 8 months ago |
The snout is kinda square. Could use a bit of rounding around the sides. |
| Anonymous #679437 8 months ago |
And the mouth is lopsided on the square snout. Snout structure's a bit too wide, too, I think. Or maybe the mouth is fine but the snout is too lopsided? Stretches over across her left side too far compared to the right? |
| Fiasko #679444 8 months ago |
Thanks. I rounded her snout and tweaked the facial proportions a bit: http://i.imgur.com/EGBwL.jpg |
| Fiasko #679447 8 months ago |
Thanks Anon. Finding good critique can be really hard at times :D |
| cyber95 #679454 8 months ago |
Yeah, that looks a bit better. I am glad to see artists who not only accept criticism, but actively ask for it. So many people that think that people's criticisms are just insults and think that they'll only get better with constant praise. |
| punctualjinx #679469 8 months ago |
Well Fiasko, I can say the changes to it now look....
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| Fiasko #679501 8 months ago |
It wouldn't have been possible without you guys :P
Thanks again for the critique. It's more helpful than any art book or tutorial could ever be <3 |
| DPV111 #679528 8 months ago |
Saved the edited one. Only thing I would criticize is Dash's choice of toy. Standard pink vibrator? Not very awesome. |
| Fiasko #679548 8 months ago |
This is the first clop-pic I've drawn, give me some slack :D
I was going with the "knows barely anything about sex"-version of her so it's kinda fitting IMO. |
| DPV111 #679938 8 months ago |
Well she is happy with it and that's what counts. |
| Anonymous #680171 8 months ago |
:megusta: |
| AoSAQua #680535 8 months ago |
needs crotchboobs ;O |
| AoSAQua #680537 8 months ago |
*still favorites it anyways* |
| Silver #680756 8 months ago |
Wow, the updated version is great! Thanks, Fiasko.
I'm assuming this takes place before FiM so her virginal attitude is appropriate. |