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| WhirlyWillow #667529 8 months ago |
I would like to point out that these deigns are for a fan fiction of mine so they're not supposed to be extremely canon accurate
In Chapter 5, RD wears a formal military uniform. Since in the initial design I did for her she was wearing her flight suit, I decided to do a design for the formal NLR air force uniform. |
| Poptard #667568 8 months ago |
I still don't understand why the loyalest pony in equestria leaves her friends to lead another army. Or even why a Republic can have a Princess as the Head of State. |
| WhirlyWillow #667606 8 months ago |
Is it more loyal to stay with your friends but follow a corrupt ideal or fight for whats right and best for everyone, even if it means hurting your friends?
I believe a true friend does the right thing, even if the one they're trying to help is blind to it. |
| punctualjinx #667622 8 months ago |
^^Loyalty dude...
Loyalty.... |
| Poptard #667627 8 months ago |
Well, I guess I'll just have to read the story before I make any more judgements. With no context, it's all too easy to just assume you shot canon in the face and buried it in a shallow grave.
Is it available yet, or is still being written. |
| WhirlyWillow #667650 8 months ago |
@Poptard
Yeah, its hard to explain with out spoiling too much Also, in my FF, lets just say the elements of harmony get a little.....messed up The first five chapters are available on my DA (the link will take you there, just go into my galley, the FF is in the Sabotage Valkyrie folder) |
| d715 #667911 8 months ago |
I might read this but I have a feeling its just another Luna =good Tia = evil story |
| WhirlyWillow #667967 8 months ago |
^
At this point in time it might appear that way, but things will get stupidly more complex as the stories goes (at least that's my hope) |
| d715 #668095 8 months ago |
^ That's not a good thing, often that just makes a mess. And form the bits I've read, its just another grim-dark war fic no one really acts like themselves and its rather unisterseing (to me anyway).
You're still a good artist. |
| d715 #668159 8 months ago |
Added: Also so far the story is about as moralty complex as Marvel's Civil War (which to say, none at all) |
| WhirlyWillow #668167 8 months ago |
I don't mean the story will get complex, I mean the Celestia vs Luna thing will get more complex
but hey, I don't expect my story to be a big hit with everyone but I'm glad you gave it a try anyway |
| d715 #668294 8 months ago |
Don't worry about it, I'll still check it out, but its really hard to see Celestia side in anyway good what with Twi being girl grand moff tarkin (in that I can see this Twi land a Star Destory on unarmed protesters), and you can just feel the oppession wendever its about there side.
Also right now it would seem it can go two ways, Celestia being less evil, or Luna side doing evil (the later seems the more likeiy) |
| bamakid1272 #668515 8 months ago |
^ Either way, two things are certain.
1. Pinkie is EEEEEEEVIIIIIIIL! 2. Fluttershy's faction is best faction. |
| d715 #668658 8 months ago |
^ This is true.
Also.im pretty sure pinkie is working for luna or something which wouldn`t change the current Tia is evil and Luna is good. Becuase tia`s side is just throwing around meanless words like `a bitter tomarrow` but haven`t back them up or explaine what they mean. While Twi has clearly given Luna`s side all the fire them need to use Pinkie what woth the whole bulling anyone who is`t on their side and aresting people for wearing anything the relates to luna. Al la evil onto evil. |
| WhirlyWillow #668693 8 months ago |
Actually, Pinkie and the gang tend to work for The Solar Empire more than the Republic
For P.A.R.T.Y. it all depends on who's winning at the time or who's got more money in their pocket |
| d715 #669040 8 months ago |
Well that just givea lunes side an even higher moral.high ground really. You know its funny but this whole back and forth got me intersted in the story. Like will twi get her soul back how this got so bad amd the like. Hope some of the thing i said help you improve your story. |