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Bachelorette Party Surprise
 by Hector's Pup 
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 We were out of college and a B.S. in psychology gets you nowhere
when you 
 want to earn a living in the real world.  My friend Sally and
I worked at 
 whatever odd jobs the universe would provide.  On a special
evening 
 celebrating Sally's new temporary position as a crew chief for an
inventory 
 checking service Sally laid the most shocking request of my life
on me at 
 dinner. 
 Sally was acting plenty solicitous over our second bottle of wine,
picked 
 the right moment, and asked me if I would be willing to be the entertainment 
 for her cousin Kathy's bachelorette party.  She caught me mid-sip
and I shot 
 some wine out my nose, giving me a mild rush.  My mind raced
with excitement 
 as I told her, "No way!"  Then she started working on me, not
willing to 
 take no for an answer.  It turns out she promised her other
cousin Jennifer, 
 Kathy's sister, she would be able to deliver the entertainment. 
Flattery, 
 ground rules she thought I could live with, and begging started
to wear my 
 resistance down.  It was just a matter of time, because my
fantasies were 
 getting the better of me, as she worked on my ego. 
 All the talk about what a good dancer I was, how good a shape I was
in from 
 all of my varsity sports and working out steadily, that I could
dance down 
 to whatever level of undress I felt comfortable with, that I would
be 
 admired by a room full of adoring women -- that there was a hundred
and 
 fifty bucks in it for me, was leaving me with little to hang objections
on 
 and to justify my "no" stance.  So, as you figured, I agreed. 
 I was to meet Sally at her place at nine o'clock the night of the
party, and 
 she would take me there.  The party was being held in a banquet
room
 separated off of a bar.  Sally told me to wait in the bar and
she would 
 come and get me.  I was dressed in my best out-on-the-town
outfit that was 
 tight fitting and showed off my best features.  Underneath,
I wore a tank 
 top tee shirt and high cut briefs.  I would tease the women
to request the 
 tank top off, maybe even a couple of quick peeks of my equipment
under the 
 briefs but I would end the session after a couple of dances in the
briefs 
 and high-tail it out of there preserving my dignity as best I could. 
 My nerves were shot.  My fight-or-flight response was on red-line. 
I just 
 tried to forget the whole thing.  What would be the worse thing
that could 
 happen?  I was ordering beers, but I was periodically getting
too nervous 
 to swallow normally.  I tried to watch the TV, focus on other
patrons, 
 imagining their stories, trying everything I could think of to focus
my 
 attention away from what lay ahead.  When Sally appeared with
a kittenish 
 smile, my stomach tied itself into a knot, and I started to hyperventilate. 
 Sally put her arms on my shoulders, hands on the back of my neck,
and said 
 that I would be great, and not to worry.  Some solace that
was!  She 
 grabbed me by the hand and led me into the room to a six inch dais
at one 
 end where all of the lights seemed to be directed. 
 All I could think about at this point was, how not to look as nervous
as I 
 felt.  I tried to pace the rhythm of the music as I walked
behind Sally to 
 the intimate stage.  The room was filled with friends and relatives
of 
 Kathy and Jennifer, none of whom I had ever met.  The only
person in the 
 room that I knew was Sally.  Most of the women were somewhere
in their 
 twenties.  They giggled and pointed at me, unnerving me all
the more.  A 
 couple of older ladies in their thirties and forties started the
crowd 
 cheering to try and get me in the mood.  When Sally was through
introducing 
 me and left the stage, the cheering began in earnest.  The
music volume went 
 up and I tried to "bump and grind" as I imagined would be the sexiest, 
 from practicing before my mirror at home for hours, the days before
tonight. 
 I tried to pace my disrobing, basically, one major item per song. 
Some of 
 the older ladies were starting to act a little impatient at how
slowly I 
 was progressing to the point they were anticipating.  I started
to pick it 
 up so that I was down to my tank top and underwear.  I tried
to tease as 
 best as I could muster with the tank top.  One of the older
ladies was 
 leading cheers of "take it off".  Cheers went up when I was
down to my 
 briefs.  I gave peeks, went over to bride-to-be and gave a 
private 
 lap-dance and returned to the stage.  Then I decided I would 
close it out 
 and get off the stage.  Sensing this, one of the older ladies
took out a 
 twenty dollar bill, creased it lengthwise, and waved it in the air
between 
 her index and middle finger saying, "Not so fast studly.  How
about one 
 more for the road?" 
 She came up to the stage with the body language that she intended
to stuff 
 the twenty in my briefs.  I met her at the edge of the stage, 
put my hands 
 behind my head and posed for her while she reached in to stuff the
twenty, 
 but she was taking her time and trying to get feel for her bucks. 
I lurched 
 back slightly but thought better of it as the sensation was exquisite. 
 Then without warning she took her fingers and wrapped them around
my balls 
 forcefully.  Her index finger and thumb formed a noose and
the others 
 started to squeeze the jewels against her palm.  She said,
"Anyone got some 
 scissors?  Let's do this right."  As she was waiting for
the scissors to be 
 passed forward, she told me to do exactly as I was told if I wanted
to walk 
 away with them intact. 
 The pain was making me wince and double over forward.  As she
cut my briefs 
 off, the wave of humiliation almost made the pain and concern for
my 
 testicles go away momentarily.  "Now," she said, "get your
hands on that 
 cock of yours and get it hard."  The younger women with mouths
agape were 
 silent except for occasional nervous giggles.  The older women
yelled "go 
 girl" to encourage my tormentor.  I looked for Sally, but couldn't
find 
 her in the darkened room beyond the lights.   She must
be in the back, I 
 thought, but why isn't she coming to my rescue?  Another squeeze
with a 
 pull snapped me back to the task at hand. 
 My hand went to my cock and started a familiar motion to bring it
to 
 attention.  I tried to focus my attention on an attractive
women in front 
 to make it seem like I was doing this for one woman.  This
didn't last long 
 because my lady friend with the vise grip pulled me to one end of
the stage 
 to give the ladies at that side of the room a better view. 
The humiliation 
 was starting to make this actually exciting because I had lost all
control 
 of my situation.  As I started breathing harder, Ms Vice-Grip
squeezed and 
 pulled me all of the way across to the other side of the stage,
and told 
 me not to cum until I was allowed to cum or I'd regret it. 
 As I started to approach my much needed orgasm, Ms Vice-Grip ordered
me to 
 stop and take my hand off.  Stopping short of the desired effect
made me 
 convulse momentarily, as my cock twitched and dripped a clear precum. 
She 
 waved Kathy up to the stage.  Kathy said, "No, no!" as her
party mates 
 pushed her forward to a spot immediately if front of me.  Being
raised up 
 six inches standing before her, with the index finger-thumb noose
trapping 
 and displaying my balls, cock straight, hard and twitching, presented 
 quite a sight for the blushing bride.   The new "Mistress
of Ceremonies" 
 instructed her to take a good look, to touch, and to manipulate
me so she 
 would know how her husband-to-be worked.  She reached out with
her index 
 finger and ran it along the shaft, then down around the left side
of my 
 ball sack, seemingly making a mental note of the temperature, texture, 
 turgidity, and so on.  Mistress of Ceremonies said that a man
likes a woman 
 to be more decisive and even take control of him through his genitals. 
 With encouragement from everyone Kathy started experimenting by pulling, 
 pinching, gently slapping and flicking her finger into the left
ball.  Oh! 
 The flicking was excruciating.  The pain shot into my stomach
and doubled 
 me over.  Kathy backed away in shock and Mistress ordered me
to stand up 
 again accented by a full hand squeeze not letting go until I forced
myself 
 up through the pain and I nodded with tightened lips as if to say
that I 
 would be good. 
 Now Kathy was instructed to put her mouth on my cock, to which she 
 emphatically refused.  After some teasing and the realization
that this 
 line would not be crossed by her, a volunteer was heard from the
crowd. 
 Sally appeared front and center.  She put her mouth on my aching
shaft and 
 looked up at me with her kitten eyes speaking to my brain, asking
me if I 
 was having a good time.  Here was my rescue.  She moved
her warm moist 
 mouth along the length of it and in short seconds I was starting
to arch on 
 tiptoes, she immediately took her mouth off, and Mistress squeezed
hard, as 
 I shop my load on the floor in front of the stage.  As my spasms
subsided 
 Mistress slowly released my aching balls and brushed off my genitals
as if 
 she were brushing lint off of a suit.  She gave them one last
pinch, pull, 
 and underside slap upward with her fingers, picked up the twenty
and placed 
 it between my cock and balls saying, "Good job lover, you deserve
this." 
 I got dressed, rode with Sally to Sally's place in too much shock
to make 
 conversation with her.  I got into my car and drove home in
a daze, got 
 home and masturbated to the memories of the evening trying to sort
out 
 exactly what happened. 
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