Previously published as: “Kristie’s Fantasy Birthday Auction”
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SUMMARY:
Mike fulfills a sex fantasy of his wife each year for her birthday. The year in which this story takes place, he decides to make her fantasy of being sold as a sex slave at auction become reality for a weekend. With the help of a couple friends ten individuals who are strangers to Mike and Kristie are found to participate as bidders at the auction. As the story unfolds Kristie is sold on the auction block to a total stranger to be used as his sex slave for the entire weekend. As fantasy becomes reality, both husband and wife have concerns how the fantasy will end. Will their perfect marriage be destroyed as a result?
All activities described in this story are between consenting adults except for a brief rape scene in Chapter 36. All events, places and things described are FICTIONAL and purely fantasy.
If a brief rape scene offends you, please do not read this story, or skip over Chapter 36 in part 8. If any of the following story codes are offensive to you, please avoid this story (M+/F+, M/F+, FF, Consensual Slavery, Mdom/Fsub, Fdom/Fsub, Incest (bro/sis), Incest (mother/daughter), rape (chapter 36).
ATTENTION: This is a rather long multi-part story (over 100k words in 9 parts). I hope you like the story, but if you are not into long novel length stories, or are not willing to read from Part One through Nine, you are not going to like this story. This story flows from one part directly into the next with no recap of what happened in previous parts. Part one contains very little sex, but is important to help understand the flow of the story. This story is told from the perspective of various characters. The character perspective changes, when they do occur, take place at the chapter breaks.
Hopefully you have read the previous parts and enjoy the story as it continues�
Paul did not last long at all. I saw his hands tighten on the back of my wife�s head pulling her into him as the spasms of his orgasm consumed him. He emptied his balls into her mouth with several strong spurts of cum. Kristie loves the taste of cum and swallowed everything he had to give her. She kept him in her mouth cleaning the last of his cum from his cock. As his cock started to soften she let it slip from her mouth and rose to her feet, placing her hands, once again, submissively behind her back and looking down at the floor.
Paul looked at me and then at Kristie and said, �You two will never know how happy you have made me. I will never forget this and you both will always have a special place in my heart.�
When he turned from Kristie, she bent down and retrieved her dress. Watching her put it back on, my pride in her made me once again realize what a wonderful woman I am married to. We made arrangements to meet Paul back at the entrance to this room at 7:30. This would give us 30 minutes to set everything up, prepare Kristie for display, and be ready for the arrival of our guests at 8:00 o�clock.
Wearing her heels and wrap around dress I possessively put my hand just below my wife�s waist and led her back to our room. Not a word was said until the door to our room clicked shut. Had I crossed the line by letting someone use her? I certainly hoped it played into her fantasy, but I had to be sure. There would be more of treating her like a possession rather than my wife and I had to be sure she was okay with all that was going to happen.
Kristie turned to me, �Honey that was one of the hottest things we have ever done. You giving me to that man and letting him feel my body made me so hot I almost screamed. I hope you are not mad at me for giving him a blow job. He was so sweet and I could not help myself, it felt like the right thing to do at the time.�
�Mad? Me? Hell no I am not mad, I was afraid you would be mad at me for treating you like my property and letting him feel you without discussing it with you beforehand. Baby that was the hottest and most incredible experience I do believe I have ever experienced. You make me so proud that you are my wife.�
�I am thrilled you are not mad. I enjoyed everything about that whole scene. I am excited for this evening to get started. But I do have one question. May I ask what that pole is for?�
�We can use it however we want, but I have an idea that I am sure everyone will like.�
�Are you going to share with me what is going to happen or make me wait?�
I just grinned and told her I needed to run down to the car to get her bag and some props from the trunk. She looked at me with a questioning look, but said nothing.
�Be right back, and will explain everything when I return.�
I hurried to the car and opened the small trunk. I removed her small overnight bag and a duffel bag I had stashed in there earlier in anticipation of tonight. As I headed back to the room, I ran into Paul in the lobby. He flagged me down and told me he was in my debt and that I was so fortunate to have a wife like Kristie. I smiled and explained she really enjoyed meeting him as well as getting to know him so intimately. I explained I was sorry it could not have been longer but that maybe someday we could arrange for him to spend more time with her. I explained how much we appreciated everything he was doing to help set up Kristie�s birthday fantasy. I thanked him for letting us have the room for no charge and for making sure our event was private. He told me it was his pleasure and he would see us at 7:30.
Leaving him I headed directly to our room. Using my key, I opened the door and handed Kristie her overnight bag. I told her she needed to get ready and make sure her makeup was as she wanted it. I suggested she not put her makeup on heavy. She really didn�t need all that crap on her face, but a little to enhance her features would be nice. I explained we needed to take her bag with us when we meet Paul. I explained if everything went as planned, she would not be coming back to this room once we left to go downstairs. She gave me a nervous smile and headed into the bathroom with her bag.
I opened the duffel bag on the bed and sorted through the items in it. Kristie had seen most of the �toys� in the bag, but did not know I had brought them along. I also had a couple new items she had not seen. When she finished in the bathroom, I would show her everything.
As I waited I was thinking of how this all was going to begin. It would be upon us in a very short amount of time. I wondered how I was going to react as I watched people I did not know touch my naked wife, who would be blindfolded and bound to that pole. She would be defenseless against their probing, pinching and other intimate touches. Was she ready for this? Did she really understand what this meant? Maybe the question I should have been asking myself was if I really understand what this meant? Most importantly, my most pressing concern was whether or not this would have an adverse impact on our marriage.
I knew I loved her absolutely, and that she loved me. This was her fantasy and one she had talked about often. After all, she did have a safe word and could stop it if she wanted. She would also be getting a preview of what it felt like to be seen simply as a piece of meat for the pleasure of others, during the Inspection hour. She would be able to stop the fantasy after that hour if she decided this was too much for her. We had actually agreed she could stop it up until George announced she had been sold and the sale was final.
I decided it was her fantasy and even though she was the submissive sex slave to be auctioned to the highest bidder, she was the one actually in control. As I was finishing this thought process the door opened and out walked Kristie.
�Baby, how do I look?�
�Amazing! Baby you are absolutely perfect!�
�You really think so? I am so nervous.�
�Yes baby, you look wonderful.�
�What do you think about my shoes? Do you think I should wear them during the auction?�
�That is a good question. I think you should have them on during the Inspection and then during the auction you should look your most vulnerable and be completely naked as the auction begins. What do you think?�
�I like that idea. Now please show me what you brought and tell me about that pole.�
Laughing I said, �You are the curious little slave, aren�t you? Okay, sit here and I will show you what I brought, but it will have to be quick. We need to be downstairs to meet Paul in 20 minutes.�
�I am going to lower the collar on the pole to bring the rings to just above your head. I am going to buckle a slave collar snugly around your neck and fasten a leash to the ring at the front of the collar.� At that I removed the collar and leash from the bag, showing her how it would fit. There was a post with a ring through it in the middle of the leather collar. When buckled behind her neck, the post with the ring would stick straight out. The leash would clip to that ring and the buckle would be hidden beneath her hair.
�Next I am going to place these leather cuffs around your wrists. The cuffs will be attached to the rings on each side of that pole. Remember, those rings will be above your head. It will make you vulnerable and give you the look of helplessness, which is not just an illusion, it will be for real. Having your hands secured above you will prevent you from being able to cover yourself and will give the guests complete access to your body.�
I watched her facial expression and decided all was good so far. �Honey, when you are secured to that pole, the people will be able to touch you any way they want. I am certain you will be poked and pinched. You are very likely to have fingers inserted in any of your three holes. Do not be surprised if someone doesn�t even put his cock in you.� She was just nodding her head and did not say anything. I wanted to make sure she really had a good idea of what may happen. �Baby for your protection all of the guests had to have a recent medical exam and provide a doctors assurance they are disease free.�
I was showing her the cuffs as I explained this to her. �During the inspection you will also be wearing this ring gag. It will hold your mouth open with the metal ring resting tightly behind your teeth with the strap buckled around the back of your head.� I held the gag out for her to look at, as she had never seen this toy before. She held it for a moment and handed it back, saying nothing.
�With the ring installed you will not be able to say much of anything. If you feel threatened and want to stop, stomp your left foot three times and I will stop everything. This will have the same effect as using your safe word. Do not stomp your foot unless you want to get dressed and go back home. Just in case you stomp accidentally, I will come up and ask you if you are sure. Nod your head yes or shake your head no to let me know if you want to stop. I will warn you the ring gag is going to prevent you from being able to gracefully clear the saliva from your mouth. The saliva will run out your mouth and down your body. I will clean if off of your skin before the auction. Don�t worry about the saliva, just let it flow.�
Continuing, I said, �I must confess there are going to be some things about tonight that I have not given you the details of, since I want those to be a surprise. One of those surprises I will reveal partially. Remember, you will be blindfolded and not able to see who is touching your body, or what they are doing. I will have a small table set up close by with some toys on it the guests will be encouraged to use on your body.�
I saw a look of concern, or maybe even fear, on her face and said, �Baby, you do know I love you and would never allow anyone to seriously hurt you, don�t you?�
�Yes�
�I believe I have created your ultimate birthday fantasy. You just need to trust me and enjoy the fantasy. You know that I am in tune with what you like and what you don�t like. You have read the rules and conditions that the winning bidder and us are bound to abide by, correct?�
�Yes, honey, I do trust you with my life. It is just hitting me how much work you have gone to in order to bring me this experience. I love the fact I will be totally out of control and just need to go with the flow and enjoy things as they happen. I just wish you could be there with me for the weekend.�
�I know, but that is not possible. It would ruin the entire fantasy.�
�Yes, I know, it just that we have never done anything as elaborate at this before.�
�It will be okay. The people attending have all been hand selected. You will be safe.�
�Honey?�
�Yes�
�Do you think we can repeat this birthday fantasy on one of my other birthdays?�
Upon hearing this, I started laughing and knew all would be okay and Kristie was getting into the idea of what was about to occur.
�You need to slip on your dress and heels. We need to be heading to the room and get you ready. I need to prepare you and get ready to receive the guests. I will grab the duffel and your overnight case. Remember if all goes as planned you will not be coming back to this room.�
I watched her as she slipped the wrap-around dress on and tied the sash. She pointed her painted toes slipping her heels on and then buckling the ankle strap. She stood and looked at the floor. �Darling, the slave is ready for inspection.�
I offered my arm and she took it as we left the room heading toward the elevator. My phone started ringing as we walked. �Who could that be?� Not letting Kristie see the screen, I saw the caller ID. It was George.
�Hello?�
�Yea, Mike, George here. Is everything okay? Did Paul have everything ready?�
�Yes Sir, I am glad you called.� Taking to Kristie I said, �It is the auctioneer.� Turning my attention back to George I said, �My wife and I got in a couple of hours ago and are heading toward the room where the auction will be held. Everything looks like it is set up as we planned. You do know the auction begins as 9:00 o�clock, correct?�
�Hey buddy I know you can�t talk much with Kristie there, but I am so pumped up. This is going be one hell of a night! By the way, I got the video camera and tripod.�
�Yes, sir and I totally agree. I do appreciate you handling this for me. Just to double-check, your fee for handling the auction is 10% of the sale price, correct?�
�Buddy, you know I don�t want the money, but if you insist.�
�That is great. I am happy that is settled. I will see you there a little before 9:00.�
With that I hung up and put away the phone.
�You are paying someone to conduct the auction?�
�Yes, I wanted it done right and after all you are well worth that. I expect you to bring a large sale price and want to make sure someone who knows what he is doing will be in charge of that part. These people will be so excited to have their own personal sex slave for the weekend they will likely pay a very nice sum of cash especially when they see how beautiful she is.�
�Do you have any idea how much they will pay for me?�
�No, I really had not given it much thought since it is really not about the money, but I do expect is will be several thousand dollars. I would not be surprised if the sale price was maybe ten or twenty thousand. Supposedly these people are loaded. What do you think?�
�I have no idea. I am just so excited. I can�t believe someone would be willing to pay ten thousand to spend a couple days with me.� Then smiling she said, �Maybe I should charge you for my services big boy.�
�Listen here my dear slave you forget I own you already. I am just selling your ass to someone else so I can recover some of the expenses of my ownership. After all you are a very high maintenance slave.�
She punched me in the ribs and laughed saying, �High maintenance my ass. Just wait and see when someone pays ten thousand dollars for me, we will see then who is high maintenance.�
�All joking aside, they are not paying the money to spend time with you; they are living their fantasy as well by buying and owning their own personal sex slave. It will be your fantasy as well as theirs. Regardless of how much they pay, you will be a bargain at any price. It will be fun to see how much someone really is willing to pay for the opportunity to own you for the weekend.�
�Oh, honey, that is so hot. You do realize I am soaking wet right now, don�t you?�
�I expected as much. I would be concerned if you were not wet. During the entire evening you can rest assured my cock will be about ready to burst. Speaking of that, thank you so much for calling Erica. It was not necessary for her to come over this weekend, but I am glad I will have someone to take my mind off of you. I know I would be thinking constantly as I imagined what would be happening to you every second you are gone.�
�Baby, I am glad Erica is going to spend the time with you. She was wonderful on the phone. I am anxious for us to get together with her later.�
As we approached the room we saw Paul waiting for us. �Here we are and there is Paul. Are you ready?�
�Yes, Master, if you must sell your slave for the weekend to raise money, I understand.�
I laughed as I realized she was getting her mind into the role she was to become this weekend as livestock bought at auction intended for the use of another person as their submissive sex slave.
As we approached the room Paul saw us and smiled. I asked, �Hey Paul, so happy to see you again. Everything ready?�
�Yes, Mr. Adams. Everything you ordered is ready and waiting.�
�You are going to join us, I hope.�
�Are you joking? There is nothing that could prevent me from participating in this, but I am pretty sure the item to be auctioned off tonight will bring much more than my salary can afford. I am just thankful I did get a wonderful preview prior to the sale.�
With that he opened the door. �Mr. Adams the door will automatically lock when it closes, so if you get locked out, come find me. I collected all the keys to this room from my staff. Nobody can open the door except me. I had it rekeyed so it can�t be opened with our master key. You will not be disturbed.�
�Thank you Paul. We do appreciate everything you have done.�
�The pleasure is all mine,� replied Paul.
With that he allowed the door to close leaving Kristie and me in the room alone. �We better get busy, the bidders will be here before you know it.�
I retrieved the wrench Paul had shown me was needed to adjust the pole collar. �Kristie, stand with your back to the pole, I need to adjust the height to you.�
With Kristie�s back to the pole I loosened the set screw and lowered the rings to about 12 inches over her heard. This would place the rings in a location that when her wrists were secured to them her hands would nicely out of the way and allow the bidders to closely inspect her petite little body. Tightening the screw, I told her it was time for me to get her ready.
�You can go ahead and slip your dress off and lay it over there in the corner on the table.� I removed the collar, leash, wrist restraints and gag from my duffel bag and laid them on the small table. This was the table I had told Kristie the toys would be placed on.
Looking at her, I said, �Oh baby, you are so damn beautiful! Stand here and lift your hair.� As she did, I slipped the collar around her throat. I cinched it up snug, but not overly tight. Next I clipped the leash to the ring at the front of the collar. I then clipped the other end of the leash to one of the rings on the pole.
�Let�s save the ring gag until last. Your jaw is going to get very tired with that holding your mouth open. I can put the wrist restraints on next.� I took one of the wide leather cuffs and wrapped it around her left wrist. Snugging it up I buckled it closed. I then repeated the procedure on her right wrist.
I put the overnight bag with her dress in the corner of the room. Returning to the pole, I unsnapped her leash and helped her from the pole and we walked up onto the small platform where she would stand during the auction. As we stood there, she looked at the podium next to her for the auctioneer, then at the chairs for the bidders. She looked at me and said, �I am so excited. You know how embarrassed I get when people see me naked. I now I will be totally humiliated with this many people seeing me. What makes it even worse is I will be the only person in the room naked? Honey, this is my ultimate fantasy. Giving up control and placing it the hands of a stranger who has bought me like livestock is so exciting. I love you so much for loving me enough to do this for me.�
�Having you as my wife is my ultimate fantasy. I love you more than words can express.�
Looking at my watch I realized we needed to hurry. �Okay, back to the pole.� With her standing next to the pole, I took the gag from the table and had her open her mouth wide enough to insert the ring behind her teeth. �Baby, remember you will have no control over your saliva and it will run out of our mouth onto your tits and belly. It will probably embarrass you, but that is part of the fantasy. Just let it flow out of your mouth and don�t worry about trying to stop it.� I buckled the straps for the gag behind her head. It did not have to be too tight since the ring was being held in place by her teeth. �Okay, now for the blindfold.� With the blindfold in hand I tied it tightly across her eyes, wanting to make sure she would not be able to see anything. Once in place I asked, �Can you see anything?� She shook her head no. �Can you see any light at all?� Again, her head shook no.
�Good, almost ready. I know you can�t see, so carefully step backwards one step. You will feel the cold metal pole against your back.� She did as I said and stood with her back up against the pole. �I am now going to fasten your wrists to the rings on the pole above your head.� One at a time I lifted a wrist and snapped the clip on the restraints to the pole. With both wrists secured, collared, leash attached to the pole, blindfolded and the ring gag in her mouth she was the definition of an erotic sight. As I had told her she was drooling and it had started to run over her bottom lip and hit her right breast. �Okay, you are ready. Make sure you keep your feet spread fairly wide so they can feel your wet pussy.�
I looked at my watch. I had five minutes to finish. I moved the small waist high table to Kristie�s side and removed several items from the duffle bag. These were the items I had not shown Kristie. I laid them on the table. Paul had set up the video camera George had brought. I looked to make sure it was focused on Kristie and hit the record button. Putting the duffel bag out of the way along with her dress and overnight case, I walked to the door. Opening the door, I saw George and Paul along with eight men and two women waiting to enter.
Holding the door open, I announced, �Guests please enter for the event of your life.� As the small group was entering I heard gasps as they saw Kristie naked and bound to the pole.
�Ladies and gentlemen, this is a fantasy fulfillment for our beautiful sex slave. We have set aside one hour for you to check her out in any manner you wish. She is extremely submissive and will obey your commands as best she can, considering her current situation. She does enjoy being used, humiliated and forced to please. Feel free to touch, poke and prod her as much as you need in order to decide how much you are prepared to offer for her services. You will find some toys she may or may not find enjoyable on the table next to her. She is not aware as to what all is on the table. Feel free to try any of the items. I know it will be tempting to play with her all night, please give everyone an opportunity to examine the livestock. She will not speak to you unless you ask her a direct question or give her permission to speak.�
I could see their keen interest in Kristie. I heard one man say, �This is great. I thought it was a joke, but had to see for myself. She is gorgeous! I have to win this auction.� Another man said, �Sam, you will have to pay a premium, because I intend to be the winning bidder. What man could pass up an opportunity like this?� At that I heard the voice of one of the women, �Adam, what makes you think the winning bidder has to be a man? If I have my way, which you know I usually do, that beautiful little slave will learn to love the taste of pussy, if she doesn�t already. Only a woman knows how to use the female body properly.�
I stood and listened as they talked about Kristie. I watched as a man, probably mid-40 walk up to Kristie and without saying a word, reached up and pinched her left nipple. Kristie jerked a little from the touch as she was not expecting someone to touch her. She knew it would happen and welcomed it, but not being able to see it coming surprised her when it happened. I was standing close enough to hear him say, �It is alright, my little pet. I will not hurt you it is just that those nipples beg to be pinched. How wet is your cute little bald cunt?� He cupped her pussy with his hand and squeezed. Then he inserted two fingers into her and probed around inside her. He said, �Open your legs further so I can inspect you better.� Kristie immediately moved her feet further apart and stood still as she felt the man�s fingers explore her. After a couple of minutes he pulled his fingers from her and placed them through the ring gag and said, �Use your tongue and clean your juices from my fingers.� I could see my wife try as her tongue moved all over his fingers. At the same time she was cleaning his fingers, he said, �Slave you are quite a beautiful creature. I do plan to win this auction. I will certainly enjoy using that gorgeous body of yours.�
The next person to approach Kristie was one of the women. At first she stood a few inches in front of Kristie looking at her. I could see the woman sniffing Kristie�s body evidently smelling her perfume. At the same time I saw Kristie�s nose twitching as if she smelled a perfume not her own, that of the woman inspecting her. �Tell me dear, have you had the pleasure of servicing a woman?� Kristie could not talk very well, so she simply nodded her head and made a noise that sounded like, yes. �Dear I know it is hard to talk with that damn ring in your mouth. Simply nod your head yes, or shake your head no. Do you understand?� Kristie nodded her head yes. �Excellent! While we are talking I am going to continue feeling your body.� Kristie nodded her head again. �No dear, that was not a question. I did not ask you if I could touch and inspect your body, I was simply letting you know I will be doing so as I ask you some questions. There is no need for you to consent since your Master has already given that consent to all of us. Slaves have no say in the matter. You do understand you are now livestock, don�t you?�
Kristie nodded her head indicating she understood.
�Okay, very good. I am also happy you like the taste of pussy, because if I win the auction, which I have every intention of doing, you will be eating a lot of pussy.�
�Do you enjoying being a submissive?�
Nodding yes.
�Great. I understand this is a fantasy of yours. Has your body ever been auctioned off before?�
Shake of head, no.
�I see, so this is a first for this kind of event. Has your Master ever loaned you to someone for their use? In other words, like an auction, but someone of your Master�s choice and not for money.�
Kristie did not answer.
�Hard question to answer?�
Nod of head yes.
�I see, you have done something like this, but not exactly the same. Let me see how I could better ask the question so you can answer. Okay, I think I�ve got it, are you are members of a swinger group?�
Nodding of head, yes.
�Am I correct in my assumption that your Master is also your husband?�
Nodding of head yes.
�Excellent! We are getting somewhere now. Between us girls, have you ever cheated on your husband by having sex with someone he did not know about and without his consent?�
Shake of head no.
�Really, a faithful little cunt. You do realize you are very beautiful, don�t you?�
Kristie did the best she could to shrug her shoulders.
�Come now, I can appreciate your modesty, but a beauty such as yours is not common. You must know you are a gorgeous little piece of ass?�
Kristie slowly nodded her head to show she knew.
�I have enjoyed our little chat. And I have enjoyed playing with that wet cunt of yours. Please clean my fingers now.� At that she repeated what the man before had done and inserted two of her fingers into Kristie�s mouth.
Next up with a man in his early 60�s. He was well-dressed and appeared to be polite. He walked up to Kristie and started talking to her. �Little pet, I want you to know you are absolutely gorgeous, but I figure you hear that a lot. As I have gotten older, I have developed the problem getting my cock hard and keeping it hard. It is not something I like to admit, but you don�t know who I am and I really don�t know who you are, so that is my confession. I have the feeling you may be able to help me with that situation. You beauty does make me feel like there may be a little life left in in my old withered cock. One thing I enjoy is this.� With that he picked up the pair of nipple clamps that I had placed on the table, but that Kristie did not know were available. The man bent down and sucked on Kristie�s right nipple until it was hard. He then attached the metal clamp to Kristie�s hardened nipple. Upon feeling the cold steel against her sensitive nipple, Kristie drew in a deep breath. The man started tightening the screw on the first clamp watching Kristie�s expression. When he saw the pain start to appear in her face, he gave the clamp an additional half turn and then repeated the process with the other clamp and nipple.
�Dear, this is how I like to see a pair of tits, as nice as yours, decorated. If I win you, you will be wearing clamps on these adorable nipples most of the time you are with me.�
He then walked off leaving the clamps in place. When he left, the clamps, connected by the light chain hung from Kristie�s lovely chest. The pain was evident from the expression on her face and the fact she was taking short shallow breaths through the open ring gag lodged in her mouth. After a couple of minutes the pain appeared to subside.
The probing and questions continued as the other men and the remaining woman approaching Kristie and inspected her. They used a short little crop on her ass and one even used a short whip on her tits. The last guy in line slowly remove the nipple clamps and as the blood returned Kristie moaned very loud from the pain she felt in the tits she was so proud of.
I saw Paul approaching Kristie. Most of the people had talked to her and felt her body. Paul didn�t say anything at first then I saw him lean into her and whisper something in her ear. She couldn�t smile or show much emotion, but just stood there. I saw Paul unzipping his pants. He pulled his hard cock out and as I watched, he placed it between her lips and thrust into her body. He thrusted into her five times then pulled himself out. He did not cum in her, but did get his opportunity to get her pussy juice on his cock and feel what her pussy felt like as it enveloped his cock. He put his cock back in his pants and zipped them up. He leaned against Kristie and said something to her and then kissed her on the cheek before walking away.
I approached Paul and shook his hand. �Nicely done Paul. Was she as good as you expected.� His smile was huge.
�Yes sir. She is really something.�
�Paul, can you please adjust the camera and make sure we get the whole auction on video?�
�It is the least I can do. Consider it done.�
�Thanks Paul. You are the best.�
I had been watching the time and as it reached 9:00 I walked up to Kristie and told the gentleman talking to her that it was time for the auction. I released her wrists from the pole and removed the cuffs. I them removed the ring gag from her mouth. The blindfold covering her eyes was next allowing her for the first time this evening, to see the guests who had become so intimately familiar with her body. The leash was unsnapped from the pole and I told her it was time to move to the next phase. I asked her, �Baby, do you want to continue?� With her eyes lowered, she replied, �Master, with all due respect, it is not this slave�s desire to disappoint her master. You have promised these nice people they would be able to purchase a sex slave here tonight. It is not my wish for you to disappoint them.�
�I am so proud of you. Enjoy your fantasy baby. Remember, you can stop this without penalty up until the Auctioneer says �SOLD�. She stood submissively with her eyes focused on the floor. �One more thing I have been saving as a surprise for you.� I saw her look up as if to ask the question. �Everyone here tonight is a stranger except for me and one other person.� Her gaze rose from the floor to look at me. �You will recognize the auctioneer who will sell you. It is our friend George whose cock, as you know, has been in your sexy body many times.�
For the first time tonight I saw panic in her eyes. The look of shock on her face was obvious. �Oh, Mike, George can�t see me like this! It is so embarrassing for these strangers to see me and touch me, but not George. He knows me, he is our friend. The fantasy was for strangers only. George will think I am a total slut.� Looking at her I said, �Who do you think helped me set this up? He and Stan picked the guests and made sure to get people who would be willing to buy you had lots of money and were disease free. Since you are on birth control you will not need to worry about condoms.� I used my handkerchief to wipe her saliva from her tits and stomach. As I was drying her skin, I used my finger to lift her chin and look into her eyes. �There is one more little detail I forgot to mention.�
�Oh, no I am not sure I can take any more surprises.�
�Well, I don�t think you will object to this last surprise. As you know, the winning bidder gets you until midnight Sunday, but the fantasy does not really stop then. Stan and George were so helpful setting this up, they asked, and I agreed, that you would be their slave for 24 hours each at dates to be determined later.� She smiled and said, �That is something I think I could do to thank them for all their help, but I assume that was George on the phone earlier, does he really get 10% of the sale?�
�Yes, and now you need to get your sexy little ass up on the auction block.� Kristie lifted each foot and removed her shoes handing them to me. Wearing only the collar to which the leash that I held was attached, Kristie walked up on the stage. There was quite a bit of applause from the small group as they watched her ascend the platform. From the corner of the room, we saw our auctioneer appear with a huge smile on his face.
As George stepped onto the stage the applause died. George began, �Ladies and gentlemen you have had the opportunity to inspect the livestock we have for sale this evening. Please listen to the terms and conditions of the sale of this beautiful slave. If for any reason you cannot abide by these rules and conditions, you are free to remain and watch this unique event, but please do not bid on the livestock being offered for sale. If you actively bid, it is understood you will abide by what I am about to read. The winning bidder will sign a copy of the document and will take immediate possession of the property. Let me read the rules, and I will answer any questions you may have before we start the bidding.
I handed the leash to George and gave Kristie a kiss on her cheek. I then walked to the back of the room and waited to see whose cock or cunt would have control of my sweet Kristie until Sunday night.
George went through the list I had provided and asked the group if there were any questions. �One more thing before we get started, there may be future events such as this with this beautiful slave being offered for sale again, or some other equally sexy slave. Each of you will have the opportunity to be a part of those sales if all rules and conditions are followed. Discussion of this event is frowned upon. We know there are some members of our communities who would not understand.�
�Allow me to give you a little more information on the property being sold this evening. She is a college graduate, is 32 years of age, but as you can see could easily pass for a 21 year old. As you have no doubt noticed her skin is flawless and as smooth as silk. Her height and weight you can see for yourself. Taking one of Kristie�s tits in his hand, squeezing he said these tits are absolutely magnificent. They are 100% natural and fill a C cup perfectly. Now, if there are no questions, what is my opening bid on this exceptional piece of slave meat?�
From the front row there was a shout of, �I will start the bidding at five thousand dollars.� George said �I have an opening bid of five thousand dollars. We all know this fine ass is worth much more than that, but it is a nice place to start. Ladies and gentlemen I can give you my personal assurance this little filly knows how to treat a man. On numerous occasions she has serviced my own cock and I am here to tell you, I have experienced only a few who were equal to this little lady, but I have never had better.�
Hearing this Kristie turned red from head to toe, and with her absence of clothing, her nudity displayed clearly her embarrassment or George�s disclosure of her sexual abilities. As I stood at the back of the room, I just smiled knowing the embarrassment my wife was experiencing was only making her fantasy more memorable and raising her level of arousal.
�I will give ten thousand for this fine lady,� was heard from one of the two women.
�Thank you madam, but I assure you what we are offering here this evening for sale, while at any other time is a fine lady, make no mistake about it, the livestock for sale this evening is being sold not as a lady, but as sex slave whose abilities to please man or woman are unsurpassed. It is expected that the winning bidder will treat the property as such.�
The woman smiled and nodded her head showing she understood. There were murmurs in the crowd as they processed what George had just said.
�There you have it guys, the bid now stands at ten thousand dollars.� George knew this sale should go much higher and he was trying to figure out how to get the bidding rolling. Walking with leash in hand over to Kristie, George took Kristie�s right breast in hand and squeezed as he said, �Gentlemen, do you want to let this lady who is now the high bidder, take this hot little piece of ass home or do one of you men want to buy the property and let her experience your nice hard cock?�
�I bid twenty thousand,� was heard from one of the men who had been silent.
�Much better, but guys, I give you my personal assurance, this piece of ass it worth your life savings. You will likely not get another opportunity to experience the joy this submissive little sex slave can offer you.�
�Twenty Five thousand,� came from the woman who had previously bid ten thousand.
�I have twenty five thousand, do I hear thirty?�
The man bidding twenty five, yelled, �thirty-five thousand.� The woman whose bid had been raised, said, �Jeremy, do you really think that piece of tail is that much better than what you have had before?�
�That little bald cunt of hers is the cutest I have ever seen and appears to have the most potential of any I have ever put my cock into thus far, including yours.�
There was laughter at this disclosure of personal information. �Jeremy, you embarrass me with such untrue claims.�
�Untrue that I would know or that it is better than I claim?�
Both the woman and the man laughed and looked back to George and Kristie. Obviously it was harmless banter all in good fun. I wonder if Jeremy had fucked the woman. Probably so, but nobody cared.
With the bid at thirty-five thousand I was beginning to get worried. The money was great but my concern was that stupid penalty clause I put in that we would have to come up with half of the sale price if for some reason Kristie backed out of the fantasy. I looked up on the platform and saw her standing naked and all alone in this room full of people wanting to make her their own for the weekend. She looked so vulnerable and embarrassed. Maybe she would stop the fantasy before the final gavel fell, but I sincerely doubted she would do that.
�Okay, ladies and gentlemen, the bid is currently at thirty-five thousand. This is getting a little closer to what this fine slave is worth, but I think you need to take a better look at what we have here before us this evening.� With that George walked back over to Kristie and said, �Darling, please turn your back to these fine people and touch the floor with those cute little fingers.� Kristie did as instructed.
Placing both hands on her ass, George pulled her cheeks apart and said, �Now look at this. I am not sure if everyone got the opportunity to get a good look at this earlier. If the USDA were grading meat this would be Prime. This ass is so firm it should be illegal. Men, this ass is so incredibly tight, if you put your manhood in it, be careful it doesn�t get pinched off. I have felt lots of female flesh around my cock, but I have never felt one as tight as this one, and I have explored it with my own cock more than once. When I came in this ass, the grip on my cock was so tight I was afraid my cum was not going to be able to get out of my cock. This really is something you can�t let pass you by. An opportunity like this is a once in a lifetime event for many of us. Most men never get this kind of opportunity. I will step out on this one and give you a guarantee. If you put your cock in this slave�s ass and you don�t agree it is at the very least, equal to the best you have ever had your cock in, you will get a full refund and you will still get the slave for the weekend. Can it get any better than that? I know some of you think I am crazy, but I am that confident you will love the back hole on this beautiful piece of ass that much. I am asking you to not allow yourself to regret waking up tomorrow morning with this horrible feeling you let the opportunity to own this flesh pass you by. Nice of you in this room are going to be thinking of the person who takes this home tonight. That person will be waking up tomorrow next to this slave. Just think of waking up to this slave�s tongue licking your clit or sucking on your cock. Think about looking at this slave laying naked on your bed and you knowing you own this flesh and have the right to use this beautiful submissive slave for the entire weekend.�
I could tell George knew he had their attention. �Guys, I know this has got to be getting to you seeing this sexy little ass ready and eager for you. The door to this room is locked and nobody cares if you need to open your pants and let the monster in there have some room to breathe. Ladies, feel free to lift your skirts, as well.�
This may do the trick, George thought. If he could get them stroking their cocks and cunts they would get even more excited and maybe get the bidding up where he wanted it. He wanted to make as much money for Mike and Kristie as he could, but he would feel like he had let everyone down if she sold for less than fifty thousand.
He saw three or four guys with their pants opened. A couple of them had their cock in hand stroking themselves. He even saw one of the women with her hand under her skirt. The other one was absentminded stroking one of her nipples pinching it and running her tongue over her lips, as she watched.
�I see some of you are getting the idea. Why keep your cocks locked up with a fine filly like this in front of you? Okay, I have shown you this firm and tight little ass, but we have not talked about what is just below it?� Keeping her bent over, George touched her pussy with his finger. �Men, this cunt is also very tight, no not as tight at that ass, but I promise you it is a world class pussy. It has never had a baby pass through it and I can tell you, again from personal experience, this thing squirts! That is right, when she is all worked up, you can get a flood of pussy juice squirt from this little cunt when she cums. Not only that, when she cums, and her legs are wrapped around your back, you will think she is a boa constrictor as she tightens those legs and squeezes the cum out of you.�
�Forty Thousand� was heard from a new bidder. George noticed he had his cock in his hand and was slowly stroking it and his eyes were locked on Kristie. �That�s it,� he pointed to the new high bidder, �men, we have a man who understands a value regardless of the price. The bid is now stands at forty thousand for this once in a lifetime experience. In all reality how can you even put a price on this? Some things in this life are priceless. This is one of those items.� George knew getting them to jerk their cock during the auction was helping to increase the bidding.
�I have told you this fine little slave is submissive, but we have not shown you much of this trait. I am telling you the livestock you are bidding on is nothing if it is not delivered in a manner that begs and wants to be used.� Kristie had a look on her face as she was wondering to herself, what he was going to have her do next.
�Little slave darling, you look like you are getting tired bent over like that, please stand back up and give our eyes the treat of gazing at that perfect little body. Folks the body of this slave is nothing less than pure perfection.� Speaking to Kristie he said, �Face these nice people and take one tit in each of your hands. Hold them up for the ladies and gentlemen to get a good look.�
Taking a tit in each hand, Kristie held her tits putting herself on display. George knew this would demonstrate to the bidders in a dramatic way that Kristie would do as she was commanded. Submissiveness was a feature George believed to be essential in a sex slave. He knew Kristie would do anything she was told to do. �With these beautiful tits displayed for your inspection I will now have the slave come down off the platform and walk up to each of you where she will personally offer you a closer look and feel.� With his finger under her chin he turned her face to him. Still loud enough for the crowd to hear he told Kristie what was expected. Never did he ask or request. �Now walk up to each of these fine people and ask them to please pinch, pull or twist your nipples. Tell them they should firmly squeeze your beautiful tits. Before you go to the next potential buyer, offer them the opportunity to touch you anywhere else they might want to inspect. After they are finished thank them for being here today and showing an interest in owning you. Also thank them for touching you and making you feel good. Now go and show them what a fine piece of ass you are.�
Without a word, Kristie walked down the steps from the platform while still holding a tit in each hand. She walked to the first row of chairs and stopped in front of the first chair where the woman who had been bidding on her sat. Kristie said, �This slave thanks you for wanting to buy her body to use for your enjoyment. I would enjoy it very much if you would inspect the quality of this slave by pinching, twisting or pulling her nipples. Please check the firmness of this slaves breast flesh. You are welcome to inspect this slave�s body anywhere and in any manner to help you determine the quality and value of the property.�
�Of course honey. I would love to pinch those pretty little nipples and see if they are as fine as they appear to be. I certainly would like to take your sexy little ass home with me.� With that she took one of Kristie�s nipples between her fingers and gave both a cruel and vicious pinch causing Kristie to wince in pain.
Regaining her composure while never releasing her tits, she kept them displayed for viewing. Kristie said, �Thank you ma�am for your interest in owning this slave. Is there anywhere else you would like to inspect this slave�s flesh?�
The lady grinned. She obviously admired Kristie�s ability to take considerable pain and keep her composure. �No, I am satisfied you are worth much more than I am able to pay. My only hope is everyone else has less than me, I really do want to take you home with me tonight.�
With no emotion, other than her own submissiveness, Kristi said, �I wish you luck in the bidding.�
Kristie stepped one seat over and repeated the process for each of those invited to bid on the opportunity to own her. The two women gave her the most vicious treatment. In the last chair sat Paul, the hotel manager. She repeated her lines for Paul and when given the opportunity to pinch her nipples Paul gave her bald cunt a gentle squeeze and lightly pinched each of her nipples. Not only did his touch not hurt, his fingers felt very nice. She smiled at him and gave him an extra big smile, before heading back up on the platform. I was curious to find out what he had said to her during the inspection hour.
�Ladies and gentlemen, please give our slave a round of applause for her cock hardening performance. I see several happy cocks in the room.� All in the room clapped as Kristie continued to display her tits proudly up for their viewing pleasure.
George�s auctioneering continued, �That was just a sample of what you can expect from this slave. As I said earlier, dig deep into our pockets, because we are going to get serious now and sell her. I know everyone in attendance wants to take this piece of ass home with them tonight. Paul, the hotel manager and our benefactor for this evening has graciously reserved the Presidential Suite on the top floor of the hotel. It is available for the winning bidder to stay the night here in the luxury of the hotel with his or her new property to keep them warm and satisfied. You will be responsible for the cost of the room, but Paul has graciously offered a 20% discount and a bottle of his best Champaign for the winning bidder.�
�Now that the introductory stuff is out of the way, let�s get serious with the bidding and sell this hot piece of ass so the new owner can start enjoying their purchase. It is not fair for us to consume the winners time with such a prize as this, for our own lust.�
�Fifty thousand,� came the next bid.
�I have fifty, do I hear sixty?�
�Seventy,� was bid from the back row.
�We have seventy,� how about eighty?�
�Eighty-Five thousand,� was bid by a younger man who until now had not said much. Kristie liked his looks and his hands were soft on her nipples when he probed her flesh. Would he be her owner for the weekend?
�Mr. Cole bids eighty five thousand, does anyone want her more than that? I assure you she is worth much more.�
�Ninety-five thousand,� was yelled from the front row. This is much better. Mr. Abbot has entered a bid of ninety five thousand. Anyone else want to sink their cock in this prime piece of female flesh?�
�One Hundred Ten Thousand,� was heard as everyone looked at Mr. Cole, especially Kristie. He was a handsome man, but she had not paid him much attention until a few minutes ago. She remembered he had seemed nice and did not strike her as a sleazy pervert.
�Wow, I knew someone in the group would see the potential of this excellent piece of ass. Mr. Cole bids One Hundred Ten Thousand dollars. Does anyone wish to raise Mr. Cole�s bid? Don�t let it be Mr. Cole who wakes up in the morning to this naked slave. You will lay there with only your regrets as you think of him with this next to him.�
George looked around the room at each person and seeing nobody show any interest in laying out more, George looked to Kristie as to ask do you want to continue. Kristie gave the ever so slight nod of her head. Never wanting to give up George said one last call. Anyone want to better the current bid of One Hundred Ten Thousand dollars for the opportunity to own this livestock for the weekend? He scanned each of the bidder�s faces and saw no glimmer of continued interest. George pointed to Mr. Cole and said, �SOLD, to Mr. Cole for one hundred ten thousand dollars. Sir, I must say, you are the envy of every man and woman in this room. You officially own this very fine piece of slave flesh. Please come pay the fee, sign the agreement and claim your property.�
As I stood at the back of the room, I was flabbergasted that someone was willing to pay that much money for a weekend with my wife. She was worth every penny and more, I just never thought this fantasy would end with us making this much money. I realized if Kristie backed out we would be obligated to pay Cole $165,000. This was a sobering thought.
I picked up Kristie�s dress, overnight bag and my duffel bag of toys. I collected the toys that had been laid out on the table and put them back in the duffel bag. Heading to the platform to meet up with Kristie, George and Cole I began to wonder what I had done.
George was busy and had Cole reading the agreement again. Cole signed the agreement and handed it to me. George handed him a copy I had signed earlier. Cole took it and folded it in half and slipped it into the inside pocket of his suit jacket. Next Cole opened the briefcase he was carrying and handed me the cash. I accepted wad of bills and shook his hand. I handed his a sheet of paper saying, �Here is my cell phone number. If you encounter any problems or have any questions please call me. If there are none, just have Kristie call me sometime Sunday to let me know where to pick her up at midnight. She is one of a kind, please treat her well and make her fantasy one both of you will remember forever. She is extremely submissive and loves to please. Make sure you enjoy her and use her beautiful body for your ultimate fantasy. That is a lot of money for a weekend, but I assure you she is worth every penny.�
Cole smiled and said, �I was prepared to pay much more. After seeing her photo I knew there was no question that I had to win this auction. She is the loveliest creature I have ever laid eyes on. I assure you I will enjoy her and return her to you as agreed.�
�Mr. Cole, she now belongs to you and is your property. You officially own her until midnight Sunday, but will you permit me a moment and brief kiss before you claim your property and leave?�
�Of course, please take your time. I have every intention of enjoying my new purchase very soon.�
Looking into her eyes, I said, �Baby, this is your fantasy. Mr. Cole has bought you and you are to do everything he says. Make him as happy as you make me. Remember, he can use your body any way he likes and can allow others the same pleasure, as outlined in our agreement. Make him proud he bought you if even for only for a few hours.�
�I will Master. Thank you for this gift. I will make you proud, and serve Mr. Cole making him very happy.�
�I know you will.� I pulled her naked body to me, gave her a passionate kiss, and then turned my attention to Cole handing him the dress, overnight bag and the duffel bag. �In the duffel bag are some toys you may find useful as you enjoy your slave.�
Without looking at Kristie, I turned and quickly walked to the door, leaving the room. My heart felt like it was being torn from my chest and I knew if I looked back at her the tears in my eyes would overflow depressing her and spoiling her fantasy. What had I just allowed to happen? I knew I was responsible for this, but the fear of the realization of what I had done was smothering me. It was strange, while I had these heart breaking emotions my cock was hurting. It was swelling and was so hard it was actually painful. I knew Kristie was going to have one hell of a big story to tell me when I picked her up Sunday evening.
George followed me out and could see I was a wreck. He suggested we go to the hotel bar and get a drink. George tried hard to bring some levity into the moment as he told me we should celebrate the evening. I had counted out eleven thousand dollars and put it in a bag for him. This was his 10% of the sale I had told him I was going to pay for helping us. Being George, he tried to refuse accepting the money. I said, �George, a deal is a deal. You earned every penny. It was spectacular watching you work that crowd. It was genius how you made Kristie a piece of livestock for sale on the auction block. The way you got that crowd into the bidding war was unbelievable. I never dreamed anyone would pay that much for Kristie�s fantasy. Who is this guy that bought her? What can you tell me about him?�
�I know his father was a very wealthy oil company CEO. His mother and father were killed several years back in an accident. Trust me he can easily afford the amount he paid for Kristie, but it is still a lot of money!� Laughing, he said, �Who would have dreamed when you called me that day asking for help that this would be the outcome?�
I said, �The adventure has just begun for Kristie, I am torn wishing I could tag along and watch everything he does with her. As much as I would like to watch, and as erotic as I am sure it will be, I am pretty sure I could not bear to watch. I am sure she will be returned very sore and tired Sunday. At least for her sake, I hope that is the case. You have heard of buyer�s remorse, I have seller�s remorse. I hope I have not fucked up my marriage and my life. I love her so much. If I was to lose her I know my life would end.�
�Hey buddy, it will be okay. I know this guy and she will be fine. I had a strong feeling he would be the one to take her home tonight. I knew he was willing to pay a lot more. Did you see that case of cash he brought? It was obvious he came prepared and determined to win the auction.�
About then George said, �Hey, look there they are,� and pointed back into the hotel. I looked and saw my wife standing in the hotel with Cole and another guy who I thought I recognized as one of the men at the auction. George and I watched as the men talked. It looked like the man said something to Cole. I saw Cole nod his head like he was agreeing to something. I could see Kristie was still wearing the collar around her neck but I didn�t see the leash. I saw the second man put his hand on the side of Kristie�s face. He left it there a while, then put his other hand on her other cheek. He pulled her face to him and gave her a kiss that lasted much longer than a friendly kiss you might see as a greeting. The man pulled back from Kristie, still holding her face in his hands. He released her and turned to say something to Cole. Then he turned and walked toward the door which was the direction where we were seated. For a brief moment it looked like Kristie might have seen us, but she turned and with her hand in Cole�s arm allowed him to lead her toward the elevators. She was walking away from me following this guy I had met just a few minutes ago. I figured then that he must be using the suite that Paul had set aside. I watched with a deep longing as they turned stepping into the open door of an elevator car, and then were out of sight.
George spoke snapping me out of my trance and back to reality. �Hey buddy, don�t want to break your train of thought, or to seem overanxious, but have you told Kristie about Stan and me each getting her for 24 hours each?�
Trying to take my eyes off what I just saw, I smiled and said, �Yes, and she is looking forward to being your slave. I told her you guys would schedule the time with her after she has recovered from this weekend.�
Looking back over his shoulder to what we both just witnessed George said, �Hey buddy, relax, she will be fine. I know this Cole guy and he is a stand-up guy. Stan and I were very careful to make sure she would be safe with anyone in that room. We made sure there were no sick perverts in the group we invited. Even though all were trustworthy, if I was giving my wife to any of them for a weekend, and had to pick one from that group it would be Cole.�
�I do appreciate that George. I know you are right, but I have to come to terms with the fact I just sold my wife like a slab of meat to a stranger at an auction with my permission to do with her what he wants. Is that fucking sick or what? Now on top of that I think you and I just witnessed one of the other guys at the auction get permission from him to kiss my wife.�
Laughing at my comments, George said, �Buddy, if you consider that prime female flesh you are married to, just a slab of meat, I definitely want to meet your butcher. Also, technically in this fantasy world you created she is his property until midnight Sunday. I heard you tell him to use her as his. What exactly was it that you expected to happen when you set this up?�
I had to laugh and saw he was just trying to cheer me up. �I know, but it is really weird. Here I sit with my cock so damn hard it is actually hurting while I just saw a man take my wife to his room to use her as his sex slave for who knows what games he may have in mind. I just hope I have not destroyed my marriage. My Kristie is the sexiest and most beautiful woman in the world. I could not live my life without her. On top of that, why is my cock so fucking hard?�
Always the friend George had his own solution to my depression. �I know just what you need. You need some pussy old buddy. There isn�t a club party this weekend, but come on over to the house tomorrow. I will tell Heidi you are in bad need of some pussy. I know she would love a romp in the bed with you. If it would make you feel better, since Kristie isn�t here for me, I can get lost for a few hours and hit the golf course. You are welcome to fuck Heidi as long as you want her. She has always told me how much she likes it when you fuck her at the parties. Fucking my wife would certainly take your mind off Kristie and Cole for a while. What do you say? Want to dip your cock in Heidi�s pussy?�
�George, you have no idea how much I do appreciate the offer. The truth of the matter is Kristie already set it up with my secretary to spend the weekend servicing me. If not for that I promise you I would be taking you up on the offer. Your wife is a great fuck. I better get out of here and get my mind off this or I will go nuts.�
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