Haven : Chapter 01 - Breaking The Ice
Patreon script release - 03/19/19

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Reader’s Guide
•	The dialogue has no capitalization on purpose. Capital letters in my dialogue font are BOLD ITALIC, and used for emphasis.
•	The character \ and | = Capital I and BOLDITAL Capital I respectively. There’s a special, serif “ i ” for the letter, when it’s part of I, I’m, I’d and so on. The rest of the time, it’s just i
•	I plan on copy pasting these lines into text objects, in the page. which is why i’m trying to do it ahead of time, here.
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Page 01
panel 1: - top bar
big establishing shot of Aurora and her emolga friend Jenny walking through the fountain plaza in Haven City. this area is on a small plateau that overlooks the beach. there are numerous businesses and shops, pokemon walking about, bustling touristy looking downtown area. Jenny walks ahead of Aurora, looking over her shoulder.
•	JEN: wow, what a prick.
•	AUR: \ know, RIGHT?
•	AUR: it’s ridiculous. we were together for a year, and SUDDENLY it’s worth dumping me over? 
•	JEN: aurora, listen.

panel 2: - bottom left, pop out panel.
closer shot of both of them, down at eye level. focus on aurora, to indicate she’s our lead. Jenny turns to face aurora, aurora is closer to the camera.
•	JEN: tonight isn’t about your stupid ex. it’s not about how you kept giving him an icicle dick.

panel 3: - bottom right.
reverse shot over jen’s shoulder, looking at aurora, who is snout down and looking up. she’s bummed out and open to her friend’s advice.
•	JEN: it’s about having some fun! getting over this loser.

panel 4: - small.
maybe an ‘x... x everywhere- meme’ style hug / wide gesturing arm.
•	JEN: and the best way \ know to get over someone, is to get under someone else~
Page 02
panel 1:
Aurora and Jen are sitting at a booth, on opposite sides of the table. the table is designed for pokemon slightly larger than themselves. They’re sat next to a window, but it’s tinted and over exposed so you can’t see out of it. Typical shit you’d see on a booth at chili’s is on the table. Should they already have their food? Emolga has a bowl of tortilla chips and salsa, maybe. Aurora probably has some kind of ice cream sundae, maybe shaped like a glaceon. probably her ideal fantasy partner. Aurora is talking to Jen, but not making eye contact. Jen is eating her chips. she has a tropical looking alcoholic drink beside her. maybe Aurora’s looking at the icecream pokemon face instead.
•	AUR : \’m not really sure that bending over and putting a target on my ass is going to help, jen. there are hardly any ice types in this town. anyone would have the same problem with me.
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•	JEN : sfx cronch monch
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•	JEN: what? honey, PLEASE. there are a LOT of guys here that would love a chance to get close to a fluff ball like yourself. a bit of frozen junk can’t be a dealbreaker for ALL of them.
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•	JEN: \ think you’re blowing this ice-type thing out of proportion.
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panel 2:
a shot of the ice cream pokemon’s face. it’s face is smiling :), but lopsided and melting a little. deep metaphor about how her imaginary, ideal dude doesn’t seem to exist. 
•	AUR: that’s easy for you to say.

panel 3:
a reaction shot of emolga. she’s got her alcoholic beverage in hand, sort of. probably just has her hand on it, i guess. the cup is big.
•	JEN: it is! \ hate to break it to you, but you’re not the only pokemon with bedroom quirks.

Page 03
panel 1:
Jen is superimposed on the left side, top third, left side of the page. to her right are some flashback panels. She’s looking looking up and to the right, amusedly recounting some type shenanigans.
•	JEN: not to get TOO specific, but weird shit has happened to me TONS of times.

panel 2:
top right corner of the page. Jen is reverse cowgirl fucking an eevee who is on his back. his limbs are all sticking straight out in the air, and there are little electrical zaps around him. she’s looking back like, oh, what? are you okay? these panels should be rendered differently. maybe in partial silhouette? 
•	JEN : you remember dan, that eevee \ brought over your place last week?
•	AUR : yeah?
•	JEN: \ accidentally paralyzed him after a tie. \t just happens sometimes. feels good when they tense up all of a sudden.
•	AUR : wow.
•	JEN: he was FINE. \ always keep a pile of cheri berries on hand. good as new!

panel 3:
top right corner of the page. under the previous panel, maybe with no solid panel border? try something fancy. jen is in the coils of an unnamed ekans, and the background is swirly. he bit her.
•	JEN : one time things got a little kinky with an ekans \ was seeing a while back, and he got me with a POISON FANG.
•	AUR : ...how?
•	JEN: ha, DON’T ASK. it didn’t hurt that bad, and the poison made things a little...dreamy? it’s hard to explain.
•	AUR : and it just wore off? \ can’t imagine getting poisoned...
•	JEN: well... no. he had an antidote in his bag, thankfully.

panel 4:
side shot of the two of them, bar underneath the previous stuff. emolga is eyes closed, sipping on her booze through a straw. Aurora is very flat face skeptical. there’s a big bite taken out of her ice cream.
•	JEN: ‘rora, what \’m trying to say is, everyone has problems. every pokemon is different, so just be sure to have some stuff on hand to fix any burns or confusion or frozen dicks that might come up.

panel 5:
one of 3 panels at the bottom. aurora pov. jen makes eye contact, assertive and consoling.
•	JEN: it wasn’t your problem. it was HIS.

panel 6:
same shot. surprise doritos to jen’s right. both of her ears and eyes swing to the right. she senses something :O
•	JEN: ooh...
•	AUR: what now?

panel 7:
same shot. jen is walking away from their booth, gesturing with her hand.  
•	JEN: SOMEBODY just showed up with a really good magnetic field.
•	AUR: hey, what the hell!
•	JEN: don’t be single by the time \ come back~! good luck!
Page 04
panel 1:
aurora reaction shot, facing the camera. she frowns, deflated and blown off. her ice cream is completely melted.
•	AUR: \ hope he’s a voltorb or something.

panel 2:
aurora is startled slightly by a waiter. the waiter is (some table height bipedal pokemon with hands??? maybe something that floats? maybe a chimecho). the waiter places a milkshake in front of her, with 3 layers. green, white, green, with whipped cream and a cherry on top. little mint leaf decoration are on the whipped cream. It’s summer deerling/aurora themed.
•	WAIT: here you are, miss.
•	AUR: oh, what’s this about?

panel 3: 
•	a shot over aurora’s shoulder. the Chimecho waiter is beyond her, and using its flap to gesture subtly to the deerling [BLAKE] sitting beyond. deerling is looking up and to the side conspicuously, feigning interest in anything but aurora’s direction.
•	WAIT: the gentleman a couple tables down ordered it for you.

panel 4:
•	a closer shot of blake, still looking away with his eyes.
•	WAIT: maybe he’d like to say hello~

panel 5:
•	closer still. he makes eye contact and winks~
•	AUR [narr]: grass?
Page 05
panel 1: - 3 bars, no dialogue. big moment to moment page.
a shot from over Blake’s shoulder. aurora looks like a deer in the headlights at him, over her shoulder.

panel 2:
continued. she looks down at her drink, with her whole head totally breaking eye contact. Blake’s ears droop a tiny bit. sweat drop.

panel 3:
continued. She looks back, same expression copy pasted from panel 1. Blake raises one ear
•	BLK: …

panel 4:
continued. she twist her wrist to wave him over with her far paw. his ears perk back up.
•	AUR: hey.
Page 06
panel 1:
camera in the aisle, or in Jen’s seat. Blake stands beside the table, aurora remains in her seat. she’s got a kind of skeptical, confused expression on her face.
•	AUR: thanks for the drink...uhh-
•	BLK: blake. and no problem. \ saw your sundae melted while you were talking to your friend. Figured \’d get you something fresh.
•	BLK: hope you like mint.

panel 2:
aurora lightens up a little. she does like mint.  blake steps on a pedal on the outside of the Jen’s booth seat, which causes the seat to lower drastically. a modular setup so most pokemon in this size range can sit comfortably at the table.
•	AUR: lucky guess~ \ DO like mint.
•	AUR: my name’s aurora. oh, please, have a seat.
•	BLK: what about your friend?

panel 3:
blake is now sitting at the table. aurora rolls her eyes for her line about jen. blake earnestly delivers his observational line.
•	AUR: eh.
•	AUR: she mentioned something about a magnet field or whatever. \ don’t think she’ll be back tonight.
•	BLK: huh. \ did see an electrode roll in before she left?
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panel 4:
just a reaction shot of aurora. Aurora rolls her eyes 
•	AUR: well, good luck with that, Jenny.

panel 5:
an over the shoulder, or pov looking at Blake. probably pov, eye contact. he’s confident but trying to be cool.
•	BLK: if she’s out, then...
•	BLK: what are you doing the rest of the night, aurora?
Page 07
panel 1:
another shot of both of them, presumably from the aisle. I might have to condense this scene down a little, there’s a lot of talking shot reverse shot here…
Aurora looks down into her fuck themed milkshake while she talks. she’s a mix of uncomfortable with the reality of her situation, or a bit ashamed of herself for being in it. it’s a drag. Blake replies with surprise and concerned interest.
•	AUR: oh. uh...
•	AUR: my friend dragged me here to find someone to hook up with. get me over my recent breakup.
•	BLK: what, REALLY? wow.
•	AUR: ha, YEAH. that’s what | said.

panel 2:
a shot of aurora specifically not making eye contact with blake. she’s doing an introspective glance to the side. focus on her specifically.
•	AUR: maybe she’s right, though. she’s never hung up on crap like that.

panel 3:
moment to moment continuation, same shot. now she’s confidently looking at him, even though we can’t really see where he is atm.
•	AUR: what about you?
•	[space, second balloon on opposite corner of panel for time extension]
•	AUR: what are you doing once you’re out of here, grass boy?

panel 4:
blake closes his eyes, maybe tilts his head a bit. trying to play the line she handed him.a
•	BLK: \ didn’t have any specific plans.

panel 5:
a closeup of his eyes, i suppose? seduction glance!
•	BLK: \’m just looking to CHILL OUT.

panel 6:
his terrible wordplay leaves aurora charmed. she smiles a little, in that like half eyes closed knowing sexy smirk expression. he’s in.
•	AUR: well...
•	AUR: maybe we could arrange that.
- Porn Below
Page 08
panel 1:
establishing shot, lots of data here. We get the layout of aurora’s bedroom (should be modest, but with some pretty decorative glass things. like fake ice sculptures or other similar decorations. she’s got a snowy themed apartment. her bed spread is probably themed to match her clothes. aurora’s on the bed, sitting in a pretty closed-posture way to show that she’s into the idea, but still a little cautious. She expects this to go badly, due to his type. Blake has his front half up on the bed, and he’s making eye contact with her. he should already be partially aroused, and i guess we should probably see plantdeer sack from here. We have a camera angle that’s a little low. something interesting, to put aurora up higher than blake to show she’s got the power in this situation, and he’s like, ascending the mountain.

•	AUR: well, come on up~
•	AUR: \’m intrigued, what’s a guy like you bring to the bedsheets?
•	BLK: lemme show ya… maybe you’ll like it`

panel 2:
some kind of close up panel. blake is standing on the bed before aurora, dick mostly erect. Aurora’s face is beyond it, and she’s looking up and down the length of it. standard, simplified deer penis. maybe do a thing where her pupil is drawn as a smear, as she looks at it from end to end. She’s enthused. she says she does like it, to mirror the mint lines earlier. maybe we can set up for a triple repeat, later, after they fuck and he’s like ‘did you like it’ and she’s like ‘i did like it~’. i dunno~
•	AUR: \ DO like it~
•	[space, second balloon to the bottom corner of panel, to let the viewer admire the dong, unimpeded.]
•	AUR: it’s a little long, but it’s cute! it suits you~

panel 03:
a small panel, she kisses the tip of it
•	BLK: oooh~` thank you

panel 04:
Aurora is now standing next to blake, pointing the opposite direction. she’s got her head up against his hips / side, sort of nuzzling him. he’s checking out underneath her tails, so his head is probably obscured. we can   use a high angle for this, i guess. show them pressing their sides together. aurora looks a little concerned, eyes looking to the side away from him.
•	AUR: sorry if my… if \’m a little cold to the touch.
•	BLK: what? no, it’s fine. \’m actually partial to ice types. it’s been about a year since \’ve been with one...

panel 05:
closeup of his snout near her pussy. there’s a small icicle formed at the tip of her labia.
•	BLK: there’s really nothing else like it.

panel 06:
a lot to cram into this page, with the establishing shot. But it needs to go here. he puts his head on her pelvis. she’s looking back at him, over her shoulder. she’s not sure what to make of him. people bitch about her ice issues, she’s never been directly praised for it.
•	AUR: oh...?
•	BLK: yeah. fun to groom, too. do you...wanna?
•	AUR: ...SURE~
Page 09
panel 01:
they are laying down together. he’s bigger than she is, so he’s kind of wrapped around her. they’re in a 69 sort of position. his pelvis is on its side, and his leg is up, exposing his junk. she’s got her face near it, and she’s licking his leg. she’s got her tail pushed to the side, away from him to keep it out of his face, while he’s got his upper body in more of a sitting up position, and is licking down her back. oh i suppose,she’s naked. her capelet is tossed to the side on the bed somewhere.
•	AUR: 
•	BLK: 

panel 02:
closer shot focused on aurora. she makes the first move and licks his balls that are hanging kind of heavy against his bed-contact thigh. little puffs of steam from her mouth, maybe.
•	BLK: [gasp]...nnnn…
•	AUR-THOUGHT: well, so far, so good... 

panel 03 and 04:
a pair of panels, maybe one on top of another, bars. aurora places the tip of his dick at her mouth, and in the next panel, has slid the whole thing down her throat.
•	AUR SFX: HLK
•	BLK: o-oh, wow, AURORA…`

panel 05:
a closeup of his tongue dragging down past her tails,towards her labia, with somemotion trails to show the vector
•	AUR: 
•	BLK: here, let me-

panel 06:
his tongue snags to her labia, tugging on it. he’s frozen onto it.
•	AUR-THOUGHT: oh god DAMN it. 
•	BLK: mleh?
Page 10
panel 01:
aurora looks defeated , has his now saliva-wet dick draped across her snout. pupils down. angle is basically all on her, and his junk.
•	AUR: blake, \’m sorry, \ knew this would hap-
•	BLK:

panel 02:
follow up reaction panel. eyes straight ahead, staring off into the distance. things suddenly got real good back there
•	AUR: ooh!
•	BLK: what’s the matter?

panel 03:
some kind of shot, over blake’s shoulder, looking at aurora, who is looking over hers, at him. try to have his dick still draped across her face, somehow. it drips a bit of pre from the tip.
•	AUR: your tongue. it froze? how’d you get it off?
•	BLK: what? yeah, that happens sometimes. just needs more spit to warm it up, is all.

panel 04:
aurora is a little embarrassed, and looks a bit relieved.
•	AUR: oh...ha. yeah. 
•	AUR: that’s usually when things start to fall apart, sorry.
•	BLK: nah, it’s part of the fun~
•	BLK: anyway...

panel 05:
close up of tongue penetration
•	AUR: nnn, you’re good.
Page 11
panel 01:
another cunnilingus close up. blake has his snout smooshed against her ass, his upper teeth are touching the top outside of her labia,and his tongue is stuffed in clitoral fossa with a lot of motion lines
•	AUR: a-ah...g-gimme this thing...
•	BLK: 

panel 02:
top shot again, showing off their weird sideways 69. his leg is up in the air, and her snout is close to his sheath. his head is hidden under her tail, and his forelimb is across her back kind of holding her in place. his speech balloon comes out from under her tail
•	AUR: 
•	BLK: oh god, aurora, keep doing that. 

panel 03:
another shot from a new angle of aurora with most of the dick, out of her mouth, poised to shove down on it again
•	AUR-THOUGHT: it’s thin enough, i can probably just take the whole thing without gagging...
•	BLK: 

panel 04:
she takes the thing to the tip of the sheath. one lower eyelid up a little, she gags slightly
•	AUR: HLK
•	AUR-THOUGHT: well, almost. it’s fine. give him the twist...
•	BLK: 

panel 05:
a closeup of her wrapping her tongue around his cock, while deepthroating it.
•	AUR: 
•	BLK: oh fuck, aurora, that’s…\ think i’m gonna~!
Page 12
panel 01:
cumshot, from some angle that shows him contracting to stuff his dick deeper down her throat. maybe using his forelimb to push her butt forward. balls contracting, cheeks bulging a bit. it’s a bit uncomfortable on her, so she’s wincing a bit, but trying to keep her composure and not gag all over him. [] this is the first page where blake is now deerling(autumn) form
•	AUR: 
•	BLK: a-aaagghh

panel 02:
aurora tips her head way back, to pull most of his now half-flaccid dick out of her throat. it should be in a pretty cool looking curve, to show it’s softer now. she’s got the tip still in there, and there’s a decent stream of cum dripping out past her tongue, which is doing a blep to keep his dick off her bottom incisors. this should be a lower angle, to show this off in a kind of gratuitous fashion. like, camera near his balls or something.
•	AUR: 
•	BLK: damn...huff, \ don’t think \’ve had someone suck the WHOLE THING before...ha.
•	BLK: that was so good. YOU were so good`

panel 03:
aurora gets up and is in the process of spinning around, she’s looking to little-spoon with him. he’s still there afterglowing, laying down with his head up like deer do, looking at her.
•	AUR: so were YOU~ usually cum is kind of weird, but yours was...SWEET, somehow?
•	BLK: 

panel 04:
she’s now in cuddle position. he’s got one arm over her and she’s nuzzled in there. her butt is by his junk, which is like 90% back in sheath zone.but i guess her tail is up over the side of his body so i’m not sure if you can see that. figure it out.
•	AUR: you should bottle it and sell it or something~
•	BLK: \’ll uh, have to look into that, ha~

panel 05:
close up on their faces. he’s brought his face down to hers, and she’s uwu-ing. huggy face cuddle.
•	BLK: hey...any interest in going further tonight? or would you like to call it here. \ could go either way`
•	AUR: ooh...

Page 13
panel 01:
aurora looks away. camera’s still intimately close, though. blake puts on a face to try and console her.
•	AUR: \ mean… \ want to, but maybe we shouldn’t. \’d hate to ruin this night for us.
•	BLK: what? ‘ruin’ how?

panel 02:
she looks back over to him. maybe put the camera behind his head, with her on the left. i guess her head is now pointed at him but her eyes are down and away.
•	AUR: well… that’s basically WHY my ex left me. \ MEAN, why we broke up.
•	BLK: let me guess, icicle dick?
•	AUR: ...yeah.

panel 03:
blake leans in for a face nuzzle, eyes closed. aurora has her eyes pointed at him, now. maybe pull the camera back a little bit? she doesn’t know what deciduous means.
•	BLK: listen, \ don’t know this guy, but it sounds like he was just some DECIDUOUS IDIOT.
•	BLK: anybody going out with an ice type has to know what they’re getting into, and be DOWN with that.

panel 04:
face to face, side panel probably. it’s the easiest way to get out of this without dragging on too much. make their noses touch.
•	BLK: and \’M down with that. so what do you say?
•	AUR: …\ say…

panel 05:
she kisses him on the lips, closeup small panel.

panel 06:
moment to moment copy paste, with her slightly away now.
•	AUR: YES.

Page 14
panel 01: -medium size
jump forward a minute or so in time. she’s scooted a small chest of some sort to the edge of her bed, and her back legs are standing on that. her upper body is over the edge of the mattress. she’s looking over her shoulder at him. he’s behind her, closer to us, and he’s slurping at her junk a little bit.her tail is up over herself to the side.
•	AUR: this ought to do it.
•	AUR: whenever you’re ready~
•	BLK: just doing a little prep work back here…
•	AUR: ooh~`

panel 02:
small. reaction shot of blake, looking at his handiwork.
•	AUR: 
•	BLK: that oughta keep things moving for a little bit, at least.

panel 03: - large
mount panel. Blake is on her, his dick is hanging down, erect. maybe a hard, low angle here to show it all off. his front hooves should be on the bed, on either side of her head. she’ll be grabbing them later.
•	BLK: not squishing you, am \?
•	AUR: nah, i’m fine.

panel 04:
closeup of his dick missing on the first thrust, prodding her side-pussy instead. top pussy region is down
•	AUR: ha, a little off...hang on...

panel 05:immediate follow up
she re-angles her ass slightly. the tip of his dick catches her opening. a smear of pre from where his dick dragged across her butt, and the further away it is, the more ice there is. show the thin layer like breaking off
•	BLK: ooh…\ think...
•	AUR: yeah, that’s it~ give it to me`
Page 15
panel 01:
different angle from previous shots. dick is in, but only the tip. small bits of motion lines to show slower insertion.
•	AUR: ohhhh...
•	BLK: that first push is always the best feeling...

panel 02:
moment to moment continuation. shoves in in one motion. show the labia getting rolled in along with it.
•	AUR: nnnnnnnn...

panel 03:
side, dutch angle. blake has his front legs stiff, chest and neck up high to sell big, strong thrusts. probably upper lip lifted, teeth exposed, eyes low sex pleasure face
Page 16
note : this page starts traditional panels, but gives way to a collage.
panel 01:
from behind shot, balls flopping, that sort of thing. presumably her tails are separated in the middle and hugging at his hips.
•	AUR: oh, blake~
•	BLK: d-damn, you feel good. you’re even tighter further in…

panel 02:
internal panel, stuffed somewhere in a visually interesting way. Typical canine internal, with a bit of an up at the back, a slight pinch. however, don’t have any empty space beyond his dick. just show the pressed flesh. maybe utero-pocket  beyond 

panel 03:
reaction shot of aurora, who is having a VERY good time. she’s like trying to look up over her shoulder.
•	AUR: you...you’re longer than that, \ can handle it.

panel 04:
the front of them. blake looks down, she looks dead ahead of her, momentarily concerned.
•	BLK: then you might want to hang onto something`
•	AUR: ...what?
Page 17
panel 01: big panel of him doing the typical deer jump-thrust. a huge exaggerated movement. whole dick disappears into aurora, sizable abdominal bulge below. aurora’s ass is lifted up by the motion, her feet probably leave the ground?
•	AUR: A-AAHHN!
•	BLK: NNGH`

panel 02:
blake bites / pulls on one of aurora’s ears. her eyes roll up into her head. if there’s space in the shot show her digging at the blanket with her paws. or one paw. i need her to start masturbating here, so i guess the other arm disappears beneath her?
•	AUR: ohhh...ooHHHH my godddd, you’re good…
•	AUR: \’m really close...
•	BLK: 

panel 03:
closeup of blake’s sheath close to her pussy, with just a bit of dick visible. there’s fluid trailing down , and anything touching aurora is frozen. maybe have small icicles formed on his belly, just above his sheath. she’s currently masturbating with the one paw she snuck down there.
•	AUR: oh...\ can feel you’re getting cold, blake. don’t hurt yourself
•	BLK: nngh... it’s...fine.
•	BLK: cum for me.

panel 04:
shot showing him adjust his forelimbs around her, and tucking his head and chest down. he’s about to cum.
•	BLK: ‘cuz it’s about to get real warm in there in a second-
•	AUR: oh, are you...? are we gonna?

Page 18
panel 01:
big cumshot. fun, interesting, perspective new angle. A long stream of cum pours out of her, blake is in that big first spurt paused thrust. probably have aurora’s feet lifted totally off the thing she’s standing on. blake is gritting his teeth and making some kind of like, STRONG DEER NECK PULL pose. maybe have her hind paws wrapped around his legs, to help suspend her?
•	AUR: AA-AAAAAHHNN
•	BLK: 

panel 02:
invisible dick, aurora only cum spraying out of pussy panel, ala the fennekin comic.
•	AUR: OH, BLAKE..!
•	AUR: S-SO GOOD!
•	BLK: 

panel 03:
half flaccid dick-falls-out-of-pussy panel, long stream of semen pours down. a ring of cum is frozen near his sheath in a big round chunk, there are icicles hanging down off of his underside, connecting to aurora. some are broken due to having frozen moments before.
•	AUR: so, SOO good`
Page 19
panel 01: med shot. blake is in the process of dismounting, eyes lazy, tired and afterglowing. aurora is draped limply on the bed edge, still, but her posture is more of a tired squat.BLAKE IS WINTER FORM NOW
•	AUR: hoo…\ don’t think \’ve ever cum simultaneously with someone before...that was something else.
•	BLK: huff, me either. like, WOW.

panel 02:
aurora does the cat-esque walk up beside someone and rub onto them in passing hug. comes at him head to head. blake has his head up,eyes closed. he’s working on [Aromatherapy]
•	AUR: hey...that was really something. YOU were really something...
•	BLK: 

panel 03:
aurora notices the cum ring, and is surprised. shot looking at her noticing it, camera low, level with her head.
•	AUR: oh! this is kind of embarrassing... maybe \ can..?
•	BLK: 

panel 04:
moment to moment follow up. she’s awkwardly got her mouth open and she’s like licking it.
•	BLK: nah, \’m working on it.

panel 05:
shot of blake’s shoulders up, i guess? he’s performing [Aromatherapy], so a bunch of presumably yellow mist floats out of the flower thing on his head. his eyes should probably be closed. sparkles and shit.
•	AUR[from offscreen]: ooh, what’s that?
Page 20
panel 01:
shot of the donut shaped cum thing clunking to the ground, his dick has mostly retreated into his sheath.
•	SFX:PLONK
•	AUR: oh.

panel 02:
blake is leaning with his side, up against her bed.she’s leaning against his hind leg, maybe licking his side affectionately.
•	AUR: so...do you usually change color after you get laid? that’s a new one.
•	BLK: well, it’s supposed to be seasonal. the tropical weather on this island keeps that from happening, though.

panel 03:
he licks her snout/between the eyes/face. some kind of deer kiss.
•	BLK: only really happens around some chilly sweetheart like you~
•	AUR: aw~`
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panel 01:
the two of them are cuddles up together on the bed. her bed is by a window.
•	AUR: you know, \ didn’t know what to expect, taking a grass type home...but \ had a really wonderful time.
•	BLK: thanks for taking a gamble on me~ you’re pretty wonderful yourself.
•	AUR: well, thank you`

panel 02:
continued intimate stuff. close camera, making sure to show the window in frame. the lighting is dim.
•	BLK: you’ll have to give me your number, in the morning. \’d definitely like to see you again.
•	AUR: certainly. \’d be down with -

panel 03:
dramatic contrast shot. they’re rendered in silhouette, and there’s a VERY BRIGHT LIGHT shining through the window from outside! eyes wide, sweat, etc
•	SFX: BA-BAAAAM
•	AUR: 
•	BLK: the fuck was that?!

panel 04:
a shot showing one or both of their snouts in one corner. they’re looking out her window. In an adjacent apartment building, one of the windows is blown out and there’s smoke pouring out into the night air.
•	BLK: should we call someone?
•	AUR: ...no.

panel 05:
reaction shots of the two of them. aurora’s nuzzling into blake, blake looks a little confused.
•	AUR: it’s fine. if that’s any indication, \ think jen’s (jen? jenny?) date went almost as well as ours~

•	end