This is a writing made by Pinkamena, a good friend of mine. Here is what she wrote: www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjiAWFOq_-E >A grey/maroon bat pony comes pronking up to you >She clearly has wings, why is she bouncing around? >before you have time to think anymore she's already in your face >"Hi! Im Orange Juice!... And no before you say it..." >she's speaking so energetically and quickly! S >she ushers to come closer to her, as if she has a seceret to tell you. >Orange checks around her before she whispers in your ear >"I hate oranges..." pokerface.jpg >"but enough about me! Who are you?!" "Im the guy just going to the store..." >"Really I LOVE the store! They have so many things you can buy!" >"What are you going to the store for, 'the guy'?" >She is exctiedly hovering around you a lot. It feel like she could burst into a million pieces any moment. --- And here is what I wrote for her after she asked me to expand the story a little. >You are Anonymous, or Anon in short. >Late afternoon, you are heading to the market to buy some food for tonight. >You forgot to buy some milk and some other fruits you like to eat. >While heading there, you see a giddy... pegasus in the distance, bouncing around like Pinkie Pie. >No, that's not a pegasus. That's a bat pony. >Either way, why is she bouncing? >The bat pony jumps in the air and takes flight. >Why is she so hyper tonight? >You shrug and keep walking until you eventually pass her from below. >"Hey!" shouted the bat pony from above. >When you turn around to face her, you can see her right in front of your face. >www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjiAWFOq_-E (Xenoblade Chronicles Music - Riki the Legendary Hero) "Ah!" >You jump back in surprise, but you still maintain yourself and not fall over on the ground. >"Hi! I'm Orange Juice!" said Juice. "Um... hi." >"And come over here! I've got something to tell you because it has to do with my name..." >She is talking faster than a speeding bullet and she is full of energy. >Juice ushers at you to come closer to her. >When you get closer to her, she grabs your head, brings it closer to her head, and looks around to see if any pony is looking. >"Even though my name says so..." >She then whispers in your ear. >"I hate oranges..." >pokerface.jpg >She giggles, lets you go, and you stand up straight. >"But, enough about me! Who are you?!" "I'm uh... I'm just a guy going to the store-" >"Really?! I LOVE going to the store! They have so many things you can buy from there!" >You notice that she is hovering around you with that big grin on her face. >"What are you going to the store for, 'guy'?" >She's like a bundle of joy, ready to explode at any moment. >Wait... did she call you 'guy?' "Actually, my name is Anon." >"Ohhh! Hey, Anon! My name is Orange Juice and before-" >You put your finger on her lips. "I got it." >You notice that she is slightly blushing. >Juice looks away and giggles, "Right, sorry!" >You look at Orange Juice to finally get a good look of her. >She has a gray coat, and a maroon colored mane. >She also has red silted eyes and a orange to green striped mango as her cutie mark. >You continue your walk to the market while Juice is following you. >Why is she following you? "Hey, Juice?" >She hovers in front of you, "Yes?" "Is there any reason why you're following me?" >"Well, I'm bored! There's nothing to do back at my place!" "So you just fly around Ponyville?" >"That's just one of the things I do when I'm bored. Others include being happy, scaring ponies here..." >She must have a lot of friends with that attitude. >"And it's nice to see a human for the first time!" >She keeps circling around you while hovering, examining your physique like a doctor doing a check up on you. >"Since you're going to the market, what are you buying over there?" >A little creepy to ask that question. "Well, I plan on buying some stuff there, like milk, apples, if Applejack is still there, mangoes-" >"WAIT." >You stop in place and look at Juice, who is twitching her eye. >"D-Did you say m-mangoes?" "Yeah... but, I'm not sure why-" >She widens her eyes and before you could finish asking why, she pounces at you. >"Anon! You need to give me some!" "W-What?" >"I need mangoes, Anon! You don't understand how much I need them right now!" "Uh... how much do you want-" >"All of them!" >You push Juice off of you and look at her. "That's insane!" >"I know!" "... Juice, you know I can't buy all of the mangoes for you." >"Can't you at least try?!" "That's not how it works, Juice." >"Come on!" >She drops to the floor and starts to beg like a dog. "Juice-" >"Pleeease?!" >She gives you the puppy dog eyes. >... How do these ponies make such adorable eyes like that? "... Fine!" >Juice gasps and jumps up in the air, "Yes! Yes! Yes" "But, I'll only buy you maybe around three mangoes." >"Only three?" she said? >You nod, and Juice frowns. >She sighs and looks up at you, "I guess that's fair." "I need food for myself, and I'm buying these mangoes with how much extra bits I have." >"Alright..." >She slowly smiles again and the two of you continue your walk to the market. >When you make it to the market, you can see some of the shops are about to close because of the time of day. >You need to make your errands quick. >While looking around and buying food, Juice is close to your side and watching what you buy. >She is quite close to you... but, you pay no mind to it for now. >... >As the shops slowly start to close, you look over what you have bought so far. >Eggs, milk, vegetables, water... >... Shit. Mangoes. >You look over to Juice, who is angrily scrunching her face at you. >"Anon!" cried Juice, "You said you were going to buy some mangoes for me!" >She's like a little kid at the candy store, begging his mother to buy some candy for him. "I know, don't worry." >You close up the bag and look over to where the fruit stall. >The seller is moving supplies around and looks like she is going to close soon. >You quickly walk over to the fruit stall and ring the bell. >"Hmm? Oh!" said the fruit seller, "What can I get for the two of you?" "Hey um, you have any-" >Juice pushes you out of the way so she could look at the seller. >"Mangoes!" said Juice, "You've got to have mangoes here!" >"Hmm..." said the fruit seller. >She walks over to one of her boxes and, using her magic as a unicorn, she opens it and reveals a handful of mangoes inside. >Juice drops her jaw and widens her eyes and she sees the mangoes. >... >She has been staring at the box for a while now. "Hey Juice?" >You wave your hand in her face, but she is oblivious to your action. >You sigh and look at the seller. "How much for each?" >"They are the only ones I have, so I'll have to bring them up a little higher until I can get another box in later this week." >You bring your bag of bits and lay out ten. >The seller takes them and gives you three mangoes. >These mangoes should be good for Juice. >"Anything else?" >You shake your head. "That'll be all, thank you." >"Of course!" said the seller, "Have a good night, you two!" >The seller closes the box of mangoes and puts them away. >Juice snaps out of it, shakes her head, and frowns. >"Aw... I was enjoying that sight!" she said. >Uh... what? >Juice looks back at you. >"Did you get the-" >She sees the mangoes in your hands and grins widely. >"Yes!" >She hovers over to you and brings out her hooves. >You give her the three mangoes and she immediately takes them out of your hands! >"Thank you, Anon!" "Yeah, don't mention-" >She sinks her fangs in one of the mangoes, puts the rest of the mangoes on each of her hooves, and wraps her arms around you. >You... couldn't help but hug her also. >After the hug, Juice looks at the one of the mangoes in her right hoof and gives it to you. "Is this for me?" >Juice nods and you take the mango and put it in your bag. >She then pulls the mango out of her mouth and smiles at you. >"You bought it of course! I thought I could be a good friend and share one with you!" "... Thanks Juice." >Juice looks over at the sky and the sunset and widens her eyes. >"Oh no! I need to head home!" "Why? Aren't you bat ponies nocturnal or something?" >"I gotta go home and tell everypony there that I'm fine!" >You simply shrug at her. "Alright. It was nice meeting you, Juice." >"And it was nice meeting you too, Anon! See you later, hopefully tomorrow!" >She takes another bite of the mango, flies up in the air, and heads straight home. >... What a strange, but bubbly, bat pony.